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Posted by Grandma Edie (Member # 1677) on :
 
I am new to Fragments and Feedback, and I am not sure of all the rules. I have a poem about PERELANDRA by C. S. Lewis, which I would like feedback on.It got a very nice, very personal, rejection from FANTASY AND SCIENCE FICTION.
Is it against the rules for me to post the whole thing? It is about 25 lines.

Grandma Edie
 


Posted by Infyrno on :
 
Well, I should probably leave this to the moderator to tell you but what the heck. I'm already here. You can post up to thirteen lines of anything and if people want the rest they can email you about it or ask you to email it to them. It's annoying I know. But if you post more than that, the mean boss lady will edit your post how she sees fit.

Welcome to the forum

"Stars rend to his will"

Vycye
 


Posted by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (Member # 59) on :
 
And here I am, Mean Boss Lady Extraordinare.

Grandma Edie, you probably don't need to post any of the poem now that you have described it.

Volunteer critiquers should have no problem at all deciding whether to ask you to send it to them.
 




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