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It's a fantasy short story I wrote last night. 2000 words. If you're willing to critique, let me know either in this thread, or email me at calvinmaker@philoticweb.net.
Thanks for your help, Noah
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I can't promise a long, involved critique, but I'll read it and tell you what I think.
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Sent. Thanks again to everyone who is reading/critiquing this.
And Blacwolve, if you can get it done by tomorrow afternoon, that would be great. It's a very short story, so it won't take you too long to read it.
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If you need it this afternoon, I'll have to decline this time. But if Scooter's offer of next-day service is acceptable, then go ahead and throw me a copy. [ooc] I know it's not my first time doing this for you, so you pretty much know what you can expect from me, but I'll still try to be gentle. And hey, maybe I'll surprise you this time. [/ooc]
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Thanks again to everyone who critiqued/is still critiquing the story! You guys always help make my stories a great deal better.
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Cal, due to child-tending issues and some extended family issues that arose unexpectedly, it's possible that I might not get that story back to you today. I'll still get it done; it just might take me a bit longer.
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I'll take a crack at it. Correlle and her boyfriend haven't asked me to critique any of their stories lately.... Or maybe not... Crud, Ryan's story. If you want to send it to me, I'll get it back to you at most by the 12 or 13.
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Replied. Sorry for the delay; my internet hasn't been working for the last couple of days. (I said that in the email, but just in case..).
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