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Jonathan Howard
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Let's open with a hug: [Group Hug]

Yes, the last three days you've been stressed, [Frown] and we all know that stuff was a little hard (at least I know).

But, to think that today it all shattered, breaks my heart more than yours. [Cry] I know that it's unbearable to suffer this agony; and though I may be a snarky little piece of defecations, I can't bear not to share your pain.

Yes, Raia - I have ascended to sympathy from the nothing I had in my previous major thread. So let me give you a little to ease your pain, if it is even possible.

[Kiss]

It was always what worked for Jews. "Kiss it and it'll be better." It may not physically effective - say the Biologists - but I hope that this can partly mend your bleeding heart. Trust me, for every trickle of blood you have I want to shed a river. I know, though, that you like my poetry, so I wrote you in 2 minutes a prototype:

A trickling stream of the blood from your heart
Will sadden one more than you’d think;
I, though, have rivers of pouring red stuff,
So my heart in the emptiness shrinks.

And even though one might be feeling now sad,
Or the tears are running down cheeks;
A heavy-heart sense then infects my own chest,
And into my mind it then sneaks.

My heart will then weigh more and press down on me,
Until I will bare it no more;
For you know that for every droplet that falls,
My heart will be filled more with sores.

I carry your pain with the burden on soul,
And I hope that we’ll rise once more;
For every shiver that runs down your spine –
Is like seventy shots in my fore.

So rise, Golden Bird, and be phoenix once more,
Resurrect your despair and have bliss;
And change all the agony into pure force,
Rise then, and give joy a kiss.

Rise to your glory and lovable form,
Also, shine on us – I urge;
I know that with happiness all pain is gone,
And in us our passion will surge.


Or, listen to Simon and Garfunkle's "Bridge Over Troubled Water".

Yours with love,
JH

EDIT: New, sixth stanza (look at initials).

[ April 03, 2005, 02:12 PM: Message edited by: Jonathan Howard ]

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Raia
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[Kiss]

There are other people who need hugs more than me. But you are sweet, and a very dear friend. Thank you Jonny.

And the poem was lovely. Especially the sixth stanza. [Smile]

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Jonathan Howard
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I really don't know what to say.

So I'll shut up and let my smile do the rest.

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Nice going Jonny!

If you don't have her in bed yet, I'm sure it's only a matter of time!

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[No No]
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*smacks jebus*
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Although Eduardo was successfully lured out of hiding.

-Trevor

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Raia
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You are such an idiot, jebus.

I mean that in the best possible way. [Razz]

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Jonathan Howard
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How many ways are there?

And I'd take what he said as a compliment, although I'd love to smack him too.

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Yea I know, happy that someone has complimented you on your advances but annoyed that it was made so open to her, right?
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