Objective: To expand my work experience by working hard in your establishment. Education: 2004-2006 Institution: John Abbott College City: Ste. Anne De Bellevue Computer Science Date Attended: Second year Interests and activities: Games, hikes, music, soccer, paintball.
Work experience: Christmas holidays. Jean Francois Rigaud Bagger Job Description: Bagged worm fertilizer into heat sealed bags. References: ******************** Extracurricular activities John Abbott Newspaper “Bandersnatch”
Work experience Summer of 2005. Viviry Hudson Hudson Dish washer and general maintenance Job Description: Washed dishes and cleaned up the establishment at closing time. References: *********
It looks better in MS Word, but does this look okay?
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Extremely lame. I would definitely take out 'Ask for Nick or if he’s not there Christos' -- and what's the point of having 'Date Attended' on there? It's hard to interpret with the formatting so messed up, though.
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Code tags work like the italics, bold, or url tags. You just put your resume inside of [code][/code]
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You might want to remove your phone number from your post -- you're okay on Hatrack, but as a general rule, posting your number on the internet is not the best idea ever. Posts: 10886 | Registered: Feb 2000
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quote: Job Descrition: Washed dishes and cleaned up the establishment at closing time.
You should spell check. There is one mistake in the quote above that I saw immediately.
quote: Objective To expand my work experience by working hard in your establishment.
Also, in some instances you are using a ":" after items like 'Job Description:' and then you aren't using it for others such as 'Objective'. You should be consistent.
Why is your name third? When I look at resumes I like it when the name is on the top. I shouldn't have to search for your name.
I don't mean to pry...but I'm wondering how a fast food 'work experience' will help with your computer science career? Does your college have computer lab campus jobs or could you find a help desk job with some company? Those types of jobs will be much better in the long-term for you. Just my 2 cents.
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I'm just getting a part time job to pay the internet bills. After all, with my Hatrack addiction......
The ":" is because in the MS Word document its better spaced and has style to it, this is just the information since i lack the means to upload to a server.
And I'll spell check it one moment.
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Okay Spell checking a edits complete. I'll check out that site now.
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Your extracurricular activity shouldn't be sandwiched between your two work experience entries. Much better to make it a seperate section, perhaps with your interests and activites. I would put all of those below your work experience.
But, also, I would check on seeing if they have an application form they want you to fill out. No point in spending a lot of time on a resume if that's not what they use.
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No I know a girl whose a supervisor, she says bring a CV. :/
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Since you know her,you ought to ask for a little more information about what they actually want to see.
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