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Fragments and Feedback for Short Works Icon 1 Re: Theotokos Jump to new posts by dmsimone (24)   

YES! Simply, a superb author.
Discussing Published Hooks & Books Icon 1 Re: Please Look After Mom, by Kyung-sook Shin Jump to new posts by Kathleen Dalton Woodbury (32)   

Denevius, there is nothing in the registration requirements for the forum that says people can only give feedback if they are willing to receive it. Your ad hominem approach to this forum tells me that...
Fragments and Feedback for Short Works Icon 1 Re: The Ascent Made Him Plunge Jump to new posts by Denevius (18)   

Whittled down to 7600 words. Final opening revision above. Deleted the other three as it looked a bit messy.
Fragments and Feedback for Short Works Icon 1 Re: Night's Shadow Jump to new posts by Denevius (9)   

Hello! And yes, Version 2 is the revised opening paragraph.
Fragments and Feedback for Books Icon 1 Re: 2nd thirteen Jump to new posts by Denevius (4)   

The opening doesn't exactly feel like a start of a novel since it's not introducing the characters or situations we get in the first lines. I would suggest choosing one of the several events in the above...

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