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Hi all! I just finished a "modern" fantasy short story, approx 5,100 words. I don't normally read modern fantasies, and have never tried to write one. I feel great about the piece and really like it... So I'm hoping to get some unbiased opinions about it before I dare to package it up to face an editor. Pls LMK if you're interested in providing feedback on the piece, and I promise to return the favor.
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I'd love to take a look at it. Modern fantasies are my "thang." Feel free to send to hildy9595@aol.com and let me know if you want overall story critique or line-by-line grammar/spelling/nitpicking (or both). Posts: 338 | Registered: Aug 2002
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Ditto here. In fact I have a modern fantasy ss that you can critique for me after I do a first edit on it. Let me know how much detail in critique you want. mk86@radc.com
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I've got a ton of spare time, why not. Just a bit of a warning, though- some writing friends of mine have often said that what I call "editing" is harsh. Whatever I write in response doesn't mean it's horrible, it's just me playing super inspector. E-mail's- cheesemonkey79@yahoo.com
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If you don't mind a really long lag time on my response, then sure (if you do mind, then I'd still like to see it, but will understand your declining to send it ).
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Hi, Siligurl, I may have inadvertently deleted your mss if you sent it -- if I don't recognize an address I get rid of it -- but if you decided not to send it to all the critiquing offers that's all right. Just wanted to let you know I wasn't ignoring you.
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Kolona, it's not a problem... I've a friend who does the same thing. I'll resend it to you... I don't turn away the offer of help! Posts: 306 | Registered: Feb 2001
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Sorry, was away in FL for 11 days. However, I just went through all my email and I don't see your story. Did you send it to me? If you still want some feedback, please resend when you get a chance. Now that I'm home, I promise to be speedy (but thorough).
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