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Jules
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I'd like to post up two versions of a scene from one of my stories so that we can get a discussion going about the differences between the two. I would do it without hesitation except they're a bit longer than normal... about 30 lines per version. The way I see it, this is probably not going to be seen as publication of the story (its less than 5% of the total length of the story, even if it is a key scene). So, does anyone have any suggestions? Should I just post them here? Or would another way be better?
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Kathleen Dalton Woodbury
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Jules, it's really up to you in this case.

How about if you put a disclaimer at the top of each scene (each scene in it's own separate post), explaining that the scene is not the final version and less than 5% of the full text?


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Able2man
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I think seeing both would be fine. We know it is not the final thing.
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