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shadowynd
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Okay, I've a very short story (572 words) and would appreciate feedback on it so that I can learn what I need to improve.

Would anyone allow me to email the story?

Thanks!

Susan

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HSO
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I'll take a look at it, Susan.

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Sure, send it over. 572 words makes me curious.
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I'll take a look.
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Phanto
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Not 600--but 572? Intriguing .

Ping me.

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shadowynd
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572... Yup, yup, that's what MS Word's word count tells me. Nope, nothing special about the number of words, that's just how many it took me to write down what I wanted.

"Flash Fiction". What a neat term for an idea that is short n' sweet. Glad there's actually a market for something that short, not that I have any illusions that I'm nearly good enough for publication yet! *g*

Susan

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Received, read, replyed.

Cheers!

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ditto! And I liked it, too.
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Can I? Can I? Can I read it, too? Please? Please?
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I'd like a look.
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