The primary character, Ian Sarin, finds that he has unconsciously been constructing a psychic portal, which reconnects him to Katerina, a woman he has always known and not yet met. As the only recipients of the Sacred Vow, a universal call to service, they become the focus of the current iteration of an ancient ceremony. This rite bonds two lives from separate dimensions in order to reverse the disintegration of emotional ties in the Collective Consciousness. Contrary to decree, Ian and Katerina seek a way to retain their personal union long after the ritual is complete. Neither can physically remain in the other’s world, but their closest friends join to take the necessary risks to assist the couple in their pursuit.

Input for any portion up to the first four chapters (setup of query packages) would be much appreciated...now for the 13 lines...

I am too weary of being apart from her whom I am never without.

Though few wish to consider such a thing, most people actually die when they become too tired to continue on. Whether by the rigors of illness, sadness, or old age, their desire to make the effort living requires is exhausted. This will be the cause of my passing. My body could go on for some time, but my heart and spirit have lost the will.

Why not? This is fantasy. I've seen that and other genres on here as well.

<The concept is based on a premise that all the items in one's environment give off psychic vibrations, collectively defining your reality. >

Wow. That's not too distant from the idea of my main WIP...

The idea sounds intriguing. I basically liked the first 13 lines. They have a dreamlike quality, so if that was what you were going for them you hit right on. I noticed a couple of nit-picky things. You seem to use unnecessary words quite a bit, words that weaken the overall structure and put undue burden on the prose. For example:

"I am too weary of being apart from her whom I am never without."

I flagged the "too" as a useless word. What do you mean by too weary? How is that different from weary? At another point in the story if we had more basis to compare weary and too weary, it might have meaning, but right not it just pulls at this sentence. Watch out for adverbs, they say. "They" can sometimes be wrong, but I always check my adverbs to make sure the sentence cannot live without them.

"Though few wish to consider such a thing, most people actually die when they become too tired to continue on."

First, "actually" stands out in much the same way as the "too" did in the first sentence. What is the difference between actually dying and dying? As this is fantasy, we will assume nothing is a metaphor until we have more grounding anyway. Also, "Continue on" is redundant...I suggest simplifying to "continue."

Actually, I thought to give you examples, but now that I reread I see those are the only occurences. I like the rest of it. It is quite well written.