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mikemunsil
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This is ultra-short flash fiction, so I'm not going to post a fragment here because it is less than 13 lines in toto.

Nor is it fantasy or SF. However, it does express very well my feelings at this moment about being a writer (okay, in my case a wannabe, but please leave me my illusions!), and so if you care to review and respond to a grand total of 88 words, please email me.


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cklabyrinth
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Send it my way.
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Kolona
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I'll be magnanimous and read 88 words.
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Jaina
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I'll read it if you'd like.
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Rocklover
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Mike, I would be extremely disappointed if I didn't get a chance to have at it. Mhahaha.
Judith

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mikemunsil
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On the way. Thanks!
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Keeley
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Well, I don't know if I have the time for 88 words, but I'll try to fit it into my schedule somehow.

Send it on over, if you need another crit.


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NewsBys
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I always enjoy reading your stuff. Send it over if you need another reader.
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mikemunsil
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On the way. Thanks. It was too wordy, so I cut it down to 82 words.
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Humchuckninny
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I wouldn't mind taking a look at it.
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HSO
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Mike, I expected this to be posted on your board... nevertheless, I'll read it. Would you like a line by line, or general? A line by line will increase my response time by a few minutes.... just FYI.


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limo
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Hey
Any chance of having a read of this?
I know I'm late but I'd be interested to see how you work short short fiction.
li

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benskia
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Heh Heh.
I'd love to read this.
Please send it over.

Thanks.


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