Ok, i know hitting on the punctuation is not what we are really here for, but you did bring it up."Hey, Seth. Seth!", a wiry youth, with yellow, wavy hair sprouting straight up from the top of his head called out through the meandering crowd,
could be:
"Hey, Seth. Seth!" A wiry youth with wavy yellow hair sprouting from the top of his head called out through the meandering crowd.
Your phrasing allows for minimal punctuation. It could also be done:
"Hey, Seth. Seth!" A wiry youth, with wavy yellow hair sprouting from the top of his head, called out through the meandering crowd.
In either case, the ! usually means a hard stop or the end of a sentence so the next letter will be capitalized. There would be no comma after a quotation mark. I cannot think of a case to ever have a comma after a dialogue denoting quotation mark. The comma comes before the end quote in place of a comma or period in the spoken dialogue.
"Hey," he said, "where did everyone go?"
or
"Hey," he said. "Where did everyone go?"
both are correct.
Read the thread in the other section on attributions.
The correct punctuation for:
"Flynt, what are you doing here?", Seth laughed.
is:
"Flynt, what are you doing here?" Seth laughed.
or
"Flynt, what are you doing here?" asked Seth, laughing.
Notice that the ? when contained in quotes is not neccesarily a hard stop but, it can be when not followed by a tag like 'asked'. An exclamation point can work the same way.
BUT
"Flynt, what are you doing here?" laughed Seth.
would be incorrect. 'Laughed' is not a dialogue tag.
Edit: typos, omg, can I typo.
[This message has been edited by pantros (edited October 27, 2005).]
[This message has been edited by pantros (edited October 27, 2005).]