Go look in the other section on writing for "hooks that forced me to buy the book."As to a great opening I haven't listed there, following are a few of "my" favorites --
One of my favorites is from Frederick Forsythe's THE FIST OF GOD
The man with ten minutes left to live was laughing.
from HUNTING DOWN AMANDA by Andrew Klavan
This story begins on a summer's day in Hell.
The day was July thirteenth to be exact. And Hell was a little town called Hunnicut, Massachusetts.
Before it turned into Hell, it was actually kind of a nice place....
from GLORY SEASON by David Brin
Twenty-six months before her second birthday, Maia learned the true difference between winter and summer.
It wasn't simply the weather, or the way hot-season lightning storms used to crackle amid tall ships anchored in the harbor. Nor even the eye-tingling stab of Wengal -- so distinct from other stars.
from SOCIAL CRIMES by Jane Stanton Hitchcock
Murder was never my goal in life. I'm a very sentimenal person at heart. I cry in old movies. I love animals and children. I'm a pushover for a beggar in the street. So if anyone had told me five years ago that I could have willfully and with mailce aforethought killed a fellow human being, I could have said they were crazy. But life has suprises in store for all of us, not the least is the gradual discovery of who we really are and what we are capable of. However, allow me to dwell for a moment on that last evening of what I think of as my innocence.
from THE IRON DRAGON'S DAUGHTER by Michael Swanwick
The changeling's decision to steal a dragon and escape was born, though she did not know it then, the night the children met to plot the death of their supervisor.
She had lived in the steam dragon plant for as long as she could remember. Each down she was marched with the other indentured minors....
Any comments on any of those?
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