"Ask Me No Questions" has gone out to Talebones. "Killing Smith" got a form rejection from Cemetery Dance. CD gets about 500 submissions a month, but has very little backlog. "Killing Smith" off to Ellery Queen. As I mentioned, I'm trying to rework some old stories. Here is the first 13 of my current draft of "Long Time", which I started about three years ago but never finished.
My earliest memory is of a garden.
I remember a man with a long white beard. I can still feel my fingers wound in that beard, pulling myself to my feet and standing on unsteady legs. His laughing eyes look down.
My next memory is not so pleasant. My older brothers are fighting. The eldest is yelling at Mother, blaming her for something, I’ve never been sure what. Dad tells him to leave her alone, but Dad is drunk as usual, and lets his head fall to the big table that he made with his own hands. My middle brother tries to stop the eldest from hitting Mother, but isn't strong enough. He winds up on the floor with a bloody nose.
I had a name, then, but I’ve had many names. I think I'll keep my first name to myself.