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Crystal Stevens
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I feel this story is finally finished, but would like someone to take one last look at it before I submit it. In other words, I need readers.

I haven't changed the first 13 much, but if anyone wants to read it look under my other thread "11,200 SiFi, WIP". I would still like to submit this before March 31st.

I forgot to add that it's closer to 9,000 words in this particular draft .

[This message has been edited by Crystal Stevens (edited March 15, 2011).]


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babooher
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I can read this and crit by Friday if yuo get it to me quickly.
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Crystal Stevens
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Please forgive me, Babooher, for not getting back with you. My internet provider went bonkers on me and wouldn't let me online. Or to stay online for any length of time. It seems to be working now. Do you still have time to crit my story? If not, I totally understand, and hope you don't think I snubbed you. Believe me, this was beyond my control.


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