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lehollis
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Over the last few months, I've been tinkering with an outline/synopsis thing for a novel. I've mostly done only short stories. Being unemployed, I now have more time to actually work on the book.

I'm curious what some of you do before writing a book? How much preparation do you lay out before you start writing?

I've heard of authors doing all kinds of sketches about their characters, even finding clipouts in magazines to represent the characters, and so forth.

I have about 7,000 words laying out the events and actions of the story, enough that I should easily fill 90,000+ words. The emotion and character development I figure I can do along the way. It'll be easier that way, I think.


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Well I dunno how much help I'll be on this one, as of the other day I've only written the first draft of one book... And really, depending on what part of it you want to call "began..." It started like ten years ago when I got sick of Star Trek sucking. I was a huge Trekkie but just not satisfied with it. I wanted to write something original, in a kind of universe that had never been done before. I wrote out what I liked about ever science fiction show, book, movie, any type of media, I wrote it all down and said ok, how can I use this? And it morphed into an idea that was cool but ultimately was just a copy of everything. So I dug a little deeper, did some research on the staple ancient civilization subjects, you know Atlantis, Egypt, etc. Of course these have been done before, and since then we've had Stargate Atlantis, so that idea wouldn't fly. Then I happened on this excruciatingly hard to procure book (which I lent out to somebody and may consider murdering them if they don't get it back to me) which posited a connection between Sumerian, Babylonian, Akadian, and Egyptian gods. And out of that bore a really original idea that fermented in my mind for the last ten years.

Now the actual book happened when I decided to sit down and write a character based story. It very literally started as the story of three guys walking into the woods. It was kind of cool, and I thought it could go places. So I wrote an outline, and pitifully worked on it and abandoned it pretty much in the first year. I took that time to read a lot about writing, both of Orson Scott Cards books on the subject, the World Building book thats edited by Ben Bova, and this other, like Everything there is to know about writing a novel. Then I came back to it when I felt passionate about it. (And other people were like, "Wow, you're writing a book!")

The characters I based on three friends of mine, so it was easy to visualize them and give them a voice... Though it was my interpretation of them experiencing these events, so they became their own characters. A friend of mine who is proofing the book for me has done a few sketches, I've not been completely pleased with the people, but he has drawn some incredible vehicle sketches that gave me some great ideas. Some of them only got hinted at in this book, but I gotta revisit the Hatchetball concept in the second, it's too good... Anyway, I'm off my rant.

I'd say the best excercise that can be done, and I dunno if the more seasoned writers here will agree with me, but before you put anything of the actual story on paper, imagine all your characters in a room together, and write out the dialog they have with each other. Whether it be talking about the days events, or something that maybe could have happened in one of your lives... Character development not only drives the story, but it also drives character development. That's just one way to do it, I'm sure there are myriad other ways of preparing yourself.


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I've chewed through some literature about this, and I really think the best book for a beginning reader hands down is _Write_Away_, by Elizabeth George.

She is a mystery writer, not a sci-fi or fantasy writer, but I believe all of her method applies. (Although setting is more challenging.)

The thing I like most about it is that it is straight forward, and it does not go overboard on things like character development - however, it does not skimp on it, either.

I have used her basic approach in preparation of several works, and I know of others who have made progress using it, too.

Good writing!
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Robert Nowall
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Well, when I started out, I'd try novels---they either turned into short stories or died out after only two or three chapters. It was, oh, about four years before I was able to reach the end of something fairly long---and it's still easier to turn out something short. (Not that I've had any real luck with either length.)

As for method...well, I'm all over the charts there, too, a real chameleon as far as writing methods go. I've done lengthy note-writing and outlining, and also flown without guidance while keeping my notes in my head. My current novel attempt, for example, hovers at seventy-five thousand words right now, but which I only know what will happen about two chapters ahead.

Both have worked and not worked for me. There really isn't a right or wrong way. Or so I hear.


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I have to admit to doing little to no planning before I start a story/novel. If I have a story - a beginning and an end - and at least one good character in mind, I just write. Then many ideas come as I get the story down on paper. I can end up with many notebooks full of plot ideas and character devolopments etc, but most often keep most of it in my head.

With an importnat character, I have his/her whole life history in my head - parents, childhood, friends, the little things that may have happened to them in their past. I may not always use it, but they are there if I need them, and it can help to sturcture their personality.

Another thing I have done - carrying on from what dubshack said - I have done mock interviews with my characters. As for visualising them, I don't know if this is the same for most writers, but as I imagine a character, I see a picture of them in my mind.


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For the only 2 novels I completed, massively detailed outline, and a lot of daydreaming about it all.
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Ah, yes, the ultimate question: To outline or not to outline?

I've said it before, and I'll say it again -- the only rule of writing is this: A WRITER MUST FIND HIS OWN WAY.

Here's my advice.

Since you've done some work already, spend a day or two writing down everything you know about the story, then organize it.

Then start writing. Tell yourself you're going to write X-amount of pages a day, and do it.

One of two things will happen -- you'll either write until you finish it, or you won't.

If you write until you've finished it, good job! You've either discovered the way you write novels, or you just got lucky.

If you don't finish it, then stop, take a few days off, then go for long walks and try to figure out why you stopped.

You might realize that you need to have more of a map. If that's the case, then work on an outline.

You might decide that your story isn't very strong. If that's the case, then read a book or two on plot and storytelling.

Chances are, you won't be able to figure it out -- at least not right away. If that's the case, put your half-finished novel on the shelf and start on a new project. Maybe a short story or ten.

But keep writing.

Because the only way to find your own way in the writing gig is by writing until your fingers break.

I have yet to finish a novel. I quit writing for a year because I was so frustrated with it. After a year away from the keyboard, I finally started to see some of my mistakes. One was that I thought I was ready to write novels before mastering the short story. I won't say that everyone needs to write short fiction before writing novels, but I do.

Maybe you do, too.


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This is based on one data point. I didn't write an outline, but I did a lot of thinking ahead of time, and had a decent idea where I wanted the story to go, enough so that I had imagined all the important scenes before I started. So my approach was sort of in the middle.
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My first attempt at a novel was in high school. I hand wrote 198 pgs and thought it was so cool...I kept it to remind me how bad it was, still there was a good premise and some reworkable scenes. So in between HS and children I started to re write it. then put it away again while i raised the young ones, now I have pulled it out and some of my other ideas and started writing in earnest. I tell you this because I had the idea in my head for 20 years it has had a long time to evolve... ( even had the first chapter of the sequel.) As I said before, It was origionally a 2 book series, then my MC did something thatI did not plan on and it exploded into 6 maybe seven books. I in a creative fury last year wrote five books, and am now re-writing them. They needed grammar help and plot fine tuning but I went to a confrence ( recomend it to everyone!) and am so much happier seeing that there is a solid plot and it is much easier to write having the origional story and the plot revision infront of me.

I dont like ploting but I see it's use. I'll still just sit, I think, and pound out what is happening in my head, then revise it, using a outline then. I write better in an unstuctured and unpushed/unforced enviroment.

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