Say you have a bit of dialog like this (In this example I've removed everything and just left the dialog):
quote:
"Tower this is Sanitation-Uniform-Seven-Three-One. Over.""Acknowledged Sanitation-Uniform-Seven-Three-One, good morning Diego. Over."
"We have a Ten-Fourteen, requesting a clean slate. Over."
"Acknowledged. Let's see here, you have three other locations scheduled for today so I'll give them to Sanitation-Uniform-Two-Zero-Five. Tower Out."
I tried to make the conversation based off a little research on two-way communication (end everything with "over" unless you are finished then end it with "out". Repeat the last request. "Acknowledge" everything).
This seems like it would be difficult to read. That or most people would just glaze over it. Is there any benefit to trying to make radio dialog sound realistic? Or should it be something like:
quote:
"Tower this is SU731.""Acknowledged, good morning Diego."
"We have a 10-14, requesting a clean slate."
"Let's see here, you have three other locations scheduled for today so I'll give them to SU250. Tower Out."
In the second quote I removed the lettering, "Acknowledged", "Over" and the repetition. Does the use of these elements jar up the dialog or do you see it as necessary? How would you approach two-way-radio or CB dialog?
References:
http://zena.secureforum.com/ontheground/action-medical/static/library/radio_protocols .htm
http://www.commserv.ucsb.edu/faculty_and_staff/support/800mhz_usage_guidelines.asp
http://www.reliefweb.int/telecoms/training/unhcrradio.html
http://clubs.juniata.edu/esscqrs8/SOGs.html
Transcripts:
http://www.pownetwork.org/bios/f/f059.htm
http://austmia.com/TRANSCRIPTOFRADIOTRAFFIC.htm
http://archive.greenpeace.org/comms/26.html
[This message has been edited by halogen (edited October 28, 2007).]