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KayTi
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I think we've discussed this before (and am sure helpful Hatrackers will post links, LOL) but it's coming up in the "Are F&SF too burdened by their history?" thread and thought it was such an interesting topic I wanted to separate it out.

What is voice? Several authors recently have talked in their blogs about the importance of voice. About not editing yourself into oblivion because you will lose your authorial voice.

But it seems like many of us aren't quite sure what voice is. What's your opinion? What makes up an author's voice? What makes a good voice? A bad one? How do you connect with your voice? How do you protect it during revisions? How elusive is voice? What about voice makes a piece enjoyable?


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I believe an "author's voice" is the selective mannerisms of perspective, language, diction, and rhetoric of the writer that tells a story.

Depending on whose writing on writing tome one reads--from Aristotle's to Roorbach's--an author's voice might be required to be invisible or, conversely, paramount to any given story. There is no consensus of opinion among writers or readers about an authorial voice's presence in a story.


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arriki
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Imagine a story set in suburbia. A hot and steamy tale of lying, backstabbing and infidelities. Now remove all the dialogue and look at the narrative only. Imagine the "voice" of a narrator being the developer who designed, built and sold the suburb. Now imagine the narrator's voice instead being the old timey rancher whose family of Baptists had owned the area for a hundred years telling the same tale.

It's the voice of the narrator, how they choose to describe the incidents. With sad approval or salacious interest? Or whatever else informs the narrator's voice. What incidents the narrator chooses to describe. How often does the narrator slip in slyly or burst in with an opinion or judgement.

that's my understanding of voice

For an extreme example of voice read MOGHUL BUFFET by Cheryl Benard. There is a narrator with an obvious voice, one who is a character OF the story but not one IN the story.

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KayTi
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Interesting. I think of voice as being something that belongs to the author, not the narrator. I think, as previous poster pointed out (in the other thread I referenced), that some authors can tweak their voice for different stories, but I've noticed that some of my favorites tend to maintain a similar voice between works and that's one of the reasons I like those authors.


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Voice. I have always thought of it as unique to an author, not a story. For me, and I know I am not the most experienced writer, but take the first 13 challenge, a lot of people can pick my 13 out before it is revealed that it is mine. I always took this as being my voice. I am sure though, that a lot of great authors have a wider or more diversified voice than me.
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I too believed that voice was an attribute of the writer. But three experiences have changed that. First, the story by Jennifer Hicks in RFM, and second, the story in December's Asimov's by Landis -- both written in first person. If voice is an attribute of the writer, how can we write a story in first person of someone we aren't?

The third experience is my own, small in comparison. I have several stories written of the future, one steam punk, one first person love story, and one set in ancient times. Collectively there are three or four different voices in them, not because I'm hunting for my voice, but because I feel they each need a specific voice. I've deliberately selected a voice to suggest a narrator of the milieu, in an attempt to strengthen the setting of the story and some sense of feeling for the characters.

So I think voice is an attribute of the narrator, not necessarily the author. An author who spans several genres, or first person characters, will surely have a voice for each story, much as an actor has a different voice for each character. (Fleming has the same voice in all the stories of his that I have read, but they're all about 007 so that's to be expected.)

What's in common, then, that thing that draws us to a particular writer, will be the accuracy of the voice, of the portrayal of the narrator or the first person of the story--which would make an author's voice some function of accuracy and observation.

We don't often see that variety because audiences, and therefore publishers, like authors to be predictable: it helps sales. Maybe one needs a pseudonym for each voice.

Any examples more than Landis of writers with different voices? E.g. Did Heinlein have a different voice for his juveniles than his adult stuff?

Oh, I have one: Aldiss. HIs earlier work had, for me, an accessible voice. His later stuff went literary and lost me; a different voice surely.

And another: Tolkien. I thought the voice for "The Hobbit" and "Tree and Leaf" was more accessible to young people than the more adult--dare I say long-winded--tone of LOTR.

Thanks for starting an interesting thread, KayTi.

Pat

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I identify what's termed "authorial voice" in the original pst as authorial style. Authorial style, to me, is as extrinsic's definition here. It's is innate. Often times it's subconscious. It amounts to the choices, the turn of phrases, the syntax and grammatical choices the writer makes.

Voice is something else. Voice is when the author consciously uses diction and content to convey character. Many stories have strong character voice, most especially those written in the first person. However, the author's style will very often still be noticeable, and even identifiable.


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KayTi
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So, to keep the conversation going and to simplify/settle on one specific area to look at - how about 3rd person limited point of view? What does voice look like there? let's leave 1st person out for a moment because, as others have pointed out, it's often difficult to decipher what might be authorial voice versus narrator voice in first person.

Thoughts?


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Umpteen meanings for every term of art related to writing, is there any wonder creative writing is so hard to learn, and learn to do well. What if we all had an agreed-upon, comprehensive lexicon of writing terms for reference? Probably would be more contentious to arrange, barring a fait accompli, than adding a new chapter to a foundational religious text.

To keep voice's meanings distinct in my mind I've separated it into three distinct categories. This is one of my writing flashcards;

Story voice (or just plain voice as I've most often encountered it in writing tomes) is the primary person and tense of a story. Person informs who's telling the story, tense the time of the story relative to when the circumstances of the story happened, an attribute mostly in the discourse element of story.

Narrator's voice, oratorial posture of the narrator, tone or attitude toward a story's theme, invisible, remote, or intimate relationship to the story, mainly in the discourse element of story, partly related to person and tense, partly to theme and tone elements of story.

Authorial voice, nonintrusive mannerisms of a writer that are part and parcel of a story, intimate presence, remote or invisible relationship to a story, mostly an attribute of the rhetoric (schemes and tropes) element of story.

Each manner of voice has relevance to the resonance element of story. And of course, all story elements contribute to the main one, plot, as all roads lead to Rome.

Umpteen meanings of style as related to story;

Style, artistic flair, similar to authorial voice.
Style, vogues and fashions of the times.
Style, grammatical and mechanical conventions of a language.

Umpteen writing terms; umpteen meanings....


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Here's OSC on voice, from "Characters and Viewpoint"...

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You have many voices. You have one voice you use with your parents; another you use with your siblings. You might have a company voice ... a separate telephone voice. If you have children ... the stern, reproving voice, the affectionate approving voice and the baby talk ...

Each of your voices has its own vocabulary ... its own sentence structure, its own level of diction ...

When it comes to telling a story, far more choices open up to you. You can use voices in writing that you never use in speech ... regional dialect ... can bring colour and life to the telling of a story ... There's also attitude--cynical, flippant, wondering, cold, nostalgic. And level--crude, slangy, informal, formal, elevated, magesterial.

[In a first person story] the narrative voice has to sound like the first-person narrator; if it doesn't, it's a flaw in the author's technique.

But I find myself writing "in character" even when I'm using third person, even when the narrator isn't a specific person at all. I usually write in a voice similar to the voice of the viewpoint character ...

[But]

The characters will always have some overtones of the author's own style of speech. We can't escape completely from our own underlying voices even when we try.

The underlying voice that repeats from one story to the next is your natural style.


That makes sense to me--and thanks for making me read it again.

I thought I had developed something of a voice after having drafted a few stories of the near future. Then I wrote a story set in the distant past and it seemed wrong for the narrator to use modern idioms, so I consciously changed the narrative voice--I now realize, as OSC says--to one similar to the MC's. (One crit said I should use a modern voice for the narrator and reserve the more archaic voice for dialogue, but that felt wrong, even though it made the story harder to write in such a fashion as to be readable.)

So to summarise: there's a voice appropriate for the story, might be different for various stories from the same author, especially if they're first person. But too, there's an underlying voice, faint perhaps, that belongs to the writer.

I think the reason we think some authors have a distinctive voice is that they always write similar stories, because similar sells.

I believe the reason editors like stories with voice (as was observed in the previous thread) is that it brings character to the narrative; the narrator becomes someone we can relate to, someone with colour and depth, and so we become more engrossed in the story. Stories are in some sense about relationships, not just between the characters, but between the reader and the narrator and, at another level, the reader, author and magazine editor.

Cheers,
Pat

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I was involved in photography for years and almost got professional quality. When I started, I wanted to know my style, to develop it. After several thousand rolls of film, It dawned on me that style is simply what you do and how you do it.
In a photo club I was in, we knew instantly who shot some of the images simply because of the subject matter. A model was one photographer, a scenic landscape was another.
Their/our styles were developed simply by what we shot and how we shot it.

For writing, I am thinking that voice and style are interchangeable. After one has written quite a bit, one can see proper passages and recognize the author.
I write where if I cannot spell it or find out how to spell it, I won't use it. I will rewrite the sentance to avoid the word. This is the same if I am not totally sure of the proper definition or proper use of a word. My writing is really simple because of this. The subject matter and the way the work is presented creates my style. It is easily recognizable.

Others will throw in complex words and use complex sentance structures. Some will choose their words so that it is almost poetic. some will write soft and easy while others write forceful.

Each author draws together their words in a way that ends up being their voice. Like my photography, one develops a style/voice after lots of writing. It is not somethin to strive for. One simply writes and it is what develops.


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Well I think that everyone here has a different idea of what "voice" is, and i would like to say what it is to me. I think that "voice" for the reader is the way he or she hears the narration in his mind while reading the book, and for the writter, its maybe the way he or she describes all what its happening in his story. Its dificult to explain but like in the real world, we all have diferent ways to say something. So "voice" is the sign of your narration.
Sorry if i cant describe it well enough.

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