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JTR
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earlier I had posted the intro to chapter one of my story just dialog. this is the paragraph that follows. right now the storys main character is Verith it will however later be the baby (number 7) any feed back is really appreciated this is the first story I have ever put any real time into so any comments would be very helpful. thank you

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Only 13 lines per chapter, please - not 13 lines at a time in the same chapter (that makes 26 lines, then 39 lines, and so on).

If you aren't sure why we insist on just 13 lines, please go to the Please Read Here First area and read why.

Thank you.
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