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Topic: So who wants to critique?
mackillian
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posted September 10, 2003 03:59 PM
I had to write a case study of my childhood for a paper in one of my classes. Anyone want to take a gander at it? I've been a bit of a whack-job lately, so I want to make sure it's coherent. and stuff. CT, I know you volunteered earlier. Wanna edit it for me?
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Theca
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posted September 10, 2003 04:11 PM
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ClaudiaTherese
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posted September 10, 2003 04:15 PM
Yes! I'm going off to go do some work, but I'll try to get online at 8pm Wisconsin time tonight. Regardless, I'll be available for email. Can't wait to see the paper.
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dkw
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posted September 10, 2003 04:24 PM
If you trust me to try again after I never returned a critique of your last story, I will volunteer.
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Boon
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posted September 10, 2003 04:25 PM
I'll look at it for you if you'd like, too.
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T. Analog Kid
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posted September 10, 2003 04:31 PM
ditto dkw for me... I think it was an HDD story which I never critiqued in my case, though. [ September 10, 2003, 04:31 PM: Message edited by: T. Analog Kid ]
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larisse
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posted September 10, 2003 05:01 PM
I would like to read it as well if you wouldn't mind, Mack. Thanks. Admittedly, it can take me a bit to get critiques back from me, but I will get it back to you.
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rivka
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posted September 10, 2003 11:28 PM
I'd love to read it too, mack. Just be forewarned, one of the people I critique for on a regular basis dubbed me a "Super-Slow Tortoise Beta-Reader." Like the tortoise, I am slow, but I am very thorough.
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mackillian
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posted September 11, 2003 12:18 AM
Well, it's due Friday, so I need to fix it tomorrow. And since I ended up drooling on my pillow for the past three hours, I wasted TONIGHT, AND missed CT on AIM. Why, after not sleeping for three days, did I have to fall asleep at the most inopportune time?!
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Christy
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posted September 11, 2003 12:46 PM
Mack, I don't think CT was on AIM either. I was on till 8:30 and didn't see her. I am glad that you were able to get some rest, though! With all these proofreaders, you should have no trouble getting it done tonight. I'd be happy to help if you need another reader, but you seem to have quite a few.
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T. Analog Kid
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posted September 13, 2003 10:25 AM
My critique got returned to me... just wanted to let you know that I *did* send one, it just bounced.
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