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Crime, and unfair justice(or that's what it was to me)
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Storygiver
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La'Klan
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Old Friends Never Die
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Dude
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Birth Scars
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Ray
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The SkySeer; 1st 13 lines Epic/fantasy
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Dethfoot
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Dystopian Vacation
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trousercuit
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Harry Harrison
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The Traitor's Cage--first 13 lines
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KillerDonut
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"Snow" sci-fi, second attempt at the beginning...
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Constipatron
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I Never Knew You
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Aldous Huxley
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novel beginning 2 (adult language 18 and over only please)
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illbethehero
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Irony (working title)
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Storygiver
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Second Chance
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jtcarroll
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"Snow" barely started, somewhat sci-fi, not sure
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Constipatron
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Understream
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ChrisOwens
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scifi story, just started
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ethersong
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looking for insight
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lemonmeringue
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Elemental Memories
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Chimeraman2
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Blood Vows fourth attempt
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Susannaj4
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zephyr
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suspense novel
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nitewriter
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opening
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nitewriter
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"The Door" Fantasy, 2106 words so far, readers & feedback welcome
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Valtam2
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Battlefield of Fear--SF short story 861 words
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KillerDonut
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The Plowman's War - Rewrite & Request...
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Inkwell
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First try
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rslevrant
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Comments on first lines
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Marva
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Comments please
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Aspirations
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Chronicles of the Phoenix: Born of Fire - First 13 Lines
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EbonRose
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a rewrite of "My Escape" 1622 words
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chemo_man
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City of the Gods
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Silver3
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Some help with POV, please - approx 2000 words
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NMgal
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Drifter's Luck first 13
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MidDark
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The Blood that Binds Fantasy/horror first few lines
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13 lines "To Escape the Darkness" second attempt
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Dethfoot
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Trinity - new Ch. 1 - CAUTION - very mild eroticism
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PMoore
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The Price Of Love
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The Devil is Green
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Third and Final Revision/Spirit of the Glass Opening/C'mon and tell me what you think
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shevivya
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Letters to Santa - 850 words
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