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I revamped my story: "The Experiment."
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The Experiment
High pitched screeching woke Duncan Edgar from his reverie.
“I’m sorry to bother you, Dr. Edgar.” said Tanya. “Everything seems to be a go.”
“Seems to be – what do you mean?” queried Duncan Edgar.
“Tang was edgy earlier today, but he has since calmed down.”
“Oh, really,” said Duncan. “What was he doing?”
“Well, Tang was banging about in his cage for about forty-five minutes.”
Duncan hesitated. “He seems quiet now.”
“Yes,” said Tanya. “He has been quiet since about ten this morning.
“That’s good.” Duncan nodded in approval.
Giving the ape a sedative would have raised its suspicions, and
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