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JOHN
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I've moved forward, but I'm still fine-tuning that scene I posted on the board under the Dealing with Romance thread. I have a question and would like a couple of people to take a look at it. If at all possible I would like to get the opinion of both a female writer and male writer. The question and scene is of a delicated nature, and I really don't want to be thought of as "the Sex-Guy." I also don't have enough room to post a synosis of the backstory, but I would be more than willing to e-mail it, along with my stupid question, to someone that had the time to look it over. It's basically one sentence that's bothering me, but I'd lkie an opinion on the whole scene. If your up for it, leave an affirmative response with you're e-mail address and a I'll send it to you.

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JOHN!


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Sounds intriguing, John. If the opinion of a woman married for 11+ years would help, please send your questions to hildy9595@aol.com.
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JOHN
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I send it to you probably later today, 09/17/02, my files are at work. Married or no, I think a could use a femine opinion. I'll type the synopsis in the actual e-mail---Ok if I send the attachment in Word 98 format?

Thanks,

JOHN!


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No problem, Word 98 will work. I'll keep an eye out for it
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I blew off work yesterday. Sorry about that--I'm geting everything together. You'll have it before the days out. Thanks again.

JOHN!


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