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SiliGurl
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It's me, yet again... I've finished a new short story, roughly 6,000 words. It's a modern fantasy (light on the fantasy) with moderate religious overtones. I would very much appreciate feedback from anyone interested in providing it. I think the story has great potential but am afraid that I've not quite nailed it on the head yet.

As always, I will be more than happy to return the favor and review a piece by those who offer feedback to me.



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Survivor
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Your description kind of creeps me out, but I guess a few thousand words won't kill me (or drive me insane).

So go ahead Rover and send it on over.


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slickaway
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Would be happy to trade assessments of work if you still need feedback.
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Sharp
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I will be happy to take a look at it. I am working on a modern fanasty, except at the moment there dosn't seem to be any religious overtones involved. Nonetheless I would like to take a look.

[This message has been edited by Sharp (edited February 27, 2003).]


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Hildy9595
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I owe you a story, as I never received (and thus never reviewed) your last one. Send it on over...you won't even owe me one!


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teddyrux
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If you're still looking for a review, I'll take a look at it, and you won't have to read anything of mine. Unless you want to of course.

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AMMOND
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I'd love to try my hand at critique. Can I read it too?

Um... my email button wont show up...

[This message has been edited by AMMOND (edited March 03, 2003).]


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firegeek
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if you are still looking for reader, i would like to take a look at it...

eric
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