Here's the second one I worked out...let me know what you think.
The beach was empty save for a single figure standing still with his head tilted back at a slight angle, as if drinking in the cool autumn breeze. Gentle waves broke onto the shore, pushing almost to his feet, then sliding back into the gray sea. He stood with his hands thrust into his faded jeans, shoulders hunched against the biting wind. His sandy brown hair swept back from a clear brow.
A particularly strong wave reached out of the sea to kiss the toe of his worn sneakers and again slid back into the waiting ocean. He glanced down and inspected his shoe as if he didn't understand how it had become wet, and took a tentative step back.
Bobby Sanderson stood on the shore of Yurrel Beach in a small town that most people would never hear of, nor care to know about. The sky above him was concrete gray, and solid, an impenetrable ceiling. The wind broke off the water in gusts and sent spirals of sand dancing up the shore towards Deer Island Light, which stood guarding the harbor. Bobby sniffed the air and caught a sent of fall, the smell of the crisp chill in the air, and pulled his faded jacked a little closer around his slender shoulders.
Note from Kathleen:
I cut it down to just over 13 lines (to complete a sentence) which is our limit for postings of your work.
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