Just looking for anyone interested in reading the Prologue and First Chapter of this novel. Also, any comments on the first 13 are welcomed. Up for swaps.
Title: Smoke Screens; Genre: Urban Fantasy; Word Length: 5934
*** Skiel’s crimson eyes flared, and the darkness beneath the stars parted, and his sight passed through bark and wood and distance to the camp site miles away where a dozen high school girls showered in a communal bath. His hungry gaze passed over wet bodies and young faces to settle upon one in-particular. This girl, dark skinned and slim, showered quickly, to the teasing of her blonde haired friend. The girl pointed out the spiders in the corners, the roach slipping down the drain, and she spun the shower knob to shut off the steady stream of water before rushing into the small changing room...
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