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Topic: Firefly-ku
Shigosei
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posted September 28, 2005 01:20 AM
In honor of the upcoming movie: Silent, swift, glowing Flitting between the planets Serenity flies. Leader of rebels, He is broken deep inside. Bad, in the Latin. Second in command, Loyal, devoted, and true Beware her pinky. Now he sees the stars, Met the woman of his dreams Flight school was worth it. Bubbly and friendly, And when it comes to engines She bested Bester. Muscles, thuggery. He is Vera dangerous. A hero, to some. Grace and elegance, She’s a woman of repute On this firefly. To save his sister, He destroyed the life he had. He found her broken. No one yet can see The method in her madness. The damage runs deep He preaches the truth, But he is not who he seems. That ain’t a shepherd. In the quiet dark, She shelters nine from the cold. Peace be unto them.
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Mr.Funny
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posted September 28, 2005 01:37 AM
My sister is an Absolutely cool genius Her poetry rocks [Originally: My sister absolutely rocks. And is a freakin' genius. That is all.] [ September 28, 2005, 01:57 AM: Message edited by: Mr.Funny ]
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Enigmatic
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posted September 28, 2005 01:55 AM
"Grenades cost extra." Jayne has all of the best lines. "I could get nekkid."
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Teshi
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posted September 28, 2005 09:48 AM
I love it! I love the way you wove lines from the show into the poem. My only question is why did you put the stanzas in this particular order? "That ain't a shepherd" seems like awfully abrupt way to end the list bit of the poem, is all.
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Shigosei
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posted September 28, 2005 01:14 PM
I put them in a semi-random order. How do you think they should be arranged?
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Mr.Funny
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posted September 28, 2005 08:11 PM
No one else posts now This is very saddening Firefly, or die
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Beren One Hand
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posted September 28, 2005 08:18 PM
"He is Vera dangerous." Oh yeah, I'm so going to use that IRL.
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Telperion the Silver
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posted September 28, 2005 09:21 PM
"Leader of rebels, He is broken deep inside. Bad, in the Latin." Very cool.
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Enigmatic
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posted September 28, 2005 10:56 PM
Inara is hot But when you come down to it, I like Kaylee more.
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The Pixiest
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posted September 29, 2005 10:10 PM
Simon N Kalyee The 'verses cutest couple I wish they would kiss.
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Enigmatic
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posted September 29, 2005 10:16 PM
Three hours to go I can focus on naught else My Jayne hat is on
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Narnia
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posted September 29, 2005 10:23 PM
I just cannot wait I have my brown coat ready It's almost Friday!
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Enigmatic
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posted September 30, 2005 04:00 AM
Did you see that bit? And the thing with the cool stuff! This movie so rocks!
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