"Name's Bang. I was there when the world ended. I feel sorta responsible. So I'm tryin' to make the world a better place for us decent folks.
"There ya go..., my origin story.
"I'm driving down the Mississippi to some small town named Calvera.... They got a problem with an otherworldly infestation. Elves or somethin'."
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Pretty good stuff. I like the style and the story, and they go well together. I'd like something a little meatier too, but short and good beats long and drawn out.
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