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My note didn't get selected for publication. I met with the notes editor, and this was his first substantive comment. The topic was giving someone arrested for street-level drug or prostitution crimes an order requiring them to stay at least 3 blocks away from the scene of the crime as a condition of release.
Mind you, I don't think the argument that this is pre-conviction punishment is shallow. It's a fairly obvious attack on the proposed plan. Which is why I spent 10 pages discussing the issue!!!
Arrggggh! There's lots of places to disagree with my conclusions. No court has ever ruled on the constitutionality of such orders, and they implicate a lot of different policy and legal issues.
But please don't toss out one of the obvious questions any 1L would ask about the plan as a reason for dismissing the article's conclusions. At least address the six-factor Mendoza test that I spent 10 freakin' pages on.
Sheesh.
This was a rant. It was only a rant. Had this been an actual post, the complaining you just heard would have been followed by legal analysis. This was only a rant. We now return you to your Hatrack already in progress.
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I am - a new managing board will decide it the next time I submit to this journal, and I'm researching other journals right now. Getting this published is incredibly important to me.
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Karl, is the email address here able to accept half-meg files? (Edit: I just went ahead and sent it anyway.) I'm happy to send it as long as you don't circulate it. I'd love any comments you might have. Some of it is case-specific legal analysis, but much of it is policy oriented.
quote:Kidding aside, that's rather obnoxious. Did he actually read the note??
Yes. He also said, "Our first reaction was that this had to be unconstitutional, but you definitely handle that well."
Which is why I'm convinced this is a good note: it's stating something that isn't obvious and requires careful analysis to examine correctly. And there's essentially nothing published directly on point.
Part of my annoyance no doubt stems from the fact I was rejected. But to start off that way staggered me. And there were other similar comments made along the way, not quite so egregious.
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Dag, maybe the editor was responding to some limit in focus he believed you had. Ie, he thought for some reason that you didn't effectively defend the need for due process to applied, just that you said it was "unfair." Well whatever, you did write Ten pages, so somehow I imagine you got around to this... ironically your note wasn't given due process by the editor... hmmm.
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I had a professor once that wrote lots of comments in the margins as she read the paper. It was so annoying, because she'd write a really long comment about how you really should have addressed exactly what you did address in the next sentence and then she'd read a little further and write "--Oh, ok." Posts: 9866 | Registered: Apr 2002
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quote:Originally posted by dkw: I had a professor once that wrote lots of comments in the margins as she read the paper. It was so annoying, because she'd write a really long comment about how you really should have addressed exactly what you did address in the next sentence and then she'd read a little further and write "--Oh, ok."
I read the paper again, and I'm almost convinced the offending comments were due to something like this. It's almost like the editor was expecting a note arguing against the stay-away orders and starting making comments in that vein, (i.e. "Of course they're unconstitutional") then realized you were actually defending the practice (within specific and well-defined parameters). The "shallow thinking" and "you definitely handled that well" comments seem sort of schizophrenic, leading me to believe some of the comments were made before he understood what position you were taking. (Which I can only assume was due to a cursory first-read because your position was fairly clear to me on my first read and I'm not a law editor.)
But to be fair, it's probably editorial practice to skim first. It took me a loooooong time to get through the first read, but again I was in unfamiliar territory.
I'm really interested in any other comments you get from professionals. It seemed like a well thought-out and reasoned arguement to me. Let us know when it gets published. Posts: 6394 | Registered: Dec 1999
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dkw, I had a couple of professors who did that in undergrad, but for some reason it only made me feel smug. Had they not corrected themselves, I'd have likely been mad.
quote:The "shallow thinking" and "you definitely handled that well" comments seem sort of schizophrenic, leading me to believe some of the comments were made before he understood what position you were taking.
I think I gave you the wrong impression - "shallow thinking" was my commentary on the comment I received from him about punishment.
But I think you're right overall about why it happened.
Criminal procedure is the bastard stepchild of academic law.
quote:I'm really interested in any other comments you get from professionals. It seemed like a well thought-out and reasoned arguement to me. Let us know when it gets published.
Thank you. I will definitely share comments as I get them.
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My note was accepted for publication today by the Law Review. The new managing board finished their deliberations this evening and contacted me a few minutes ago.
I'd like to thank you again Karl your notes - they were very helpful.
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Oh, I dunno. The SupremeCourt has ruled that it's legal for the US, states, and local governments to use law enforcement personnel to commit armed robbery of persons carrying whatever an individual officer considers to be a excessively large amount of cash. With such confiscation challengeable in court true, but also with the weird provision that the victim is guilty-until-proven-innocent of committing a crime that makes his/her possession of that cash illegal. Funny how possessing a $20thousand diamond or car isn't grounds for confiscation, but possession of lesser amount in cash is. And the challengeability is mostly theoretical, not practical. There is no provision in the Law to force reimbursement of legal fees should the challenge be successful. "Anyone who represents himself in court has an idiot for a lawyer." And without mandatory reimbursement of legal fees, the standard fee for a lawyer to handle a challenge to confiscation case makes it a losing proposition. Even if one wins, one is out at least thousands of dollars. And unless the amount confiscated is in the tens of thousands of dollars, it is usually cheaper to forget about making a challenge, just letting the confiscating government agency keep the money.
Punishment without conviction, or even evidence that any crime whatsoever has been committed.
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The SupremeCourt allows the IRS to just assume the amount of income you have earned based solely on where you live. eg If you spend nearly all of your money to live in an expensive home, with the rest of your income barely enough to cover an extremely poor person's diet, the IRS can assume you are making a lot more "under the table" based on the spending habits of neighbors with a similar home. And tax and fine you accordingly on that estimate with no basis other than how well your neighbors live.
Punishment, legal by way of an IRS ruling based on no evidence whatsoever.
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Um, except this has nothing to do with the paper he wrote, really. You might consider starting a different thread. Posts: 6394 | Registered: Dec 1999
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I began reading it, Rob, but got sidetracked with going to the ER and stuff. Sorry I wasn't able to send notes, although I doubt I would have caught anything you and KarlEd didn't.
I will finish up reading it though, even though it is in leagalese I find the topic interesting.
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Kwea, I won't feel insulted at all if you don't want to slog all the way through it. Sections I, II, and V are the least law-heavy if you want to read about the proposal and why it will work.
They told me today they want to cut about 4,000 words (out of 25,000), which shouldn't be a problem.
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If anyone wants to read it, the PDF is on the site. I don't necessarily recomend it to anyone, but the introduction and sections I and IV are less legal analysis and more accessible to non-lawyers. There will be several conclusions in IV that are stated baldly with little support because the legal issues were analyzed in sections II and III. Here's the intro:
quote:ON November 14, 2000, Officer Andre Martin of the Washing-ton, D.C. Police Department saw John Q. Wesley, a known drug dealer, parked near the intersection of Stanton Road and Trenton Place. Officer Martin had no probable cause to believe that Wesley was in possession of drugs. Under normal circum-stances, Officer Martin would have had to either wait until he saw activity that constituted probable cause, seek consent for a search from Wesley, or do nothing. However, Officer Martin knew that Wesley was subject to an order to stay away from the intersection as a condition of pretrial release while awaiting trial for two charges of possession with intent to distribute cocaine. Officer Martin arrested Wesley for violating the stay-away order and dis-covered a handgun and two baggies of crack cocaine during a search incident to Wesley’s arrest. The resulting convictions on three charges resulted in Wesley receiving a fifteen-year prison sentence.1 Because of the stay-away order, a drug dealer who had been arrested three times at the same location was removed from society for a long period of time. The use of such scene of the crime stay-away orders for accused drug dealers who are released prior to trial serves the District of Columbia community prosecution ini-tiative’s focus on preventing crime, not merely punishing it.2
The editing process was grueling, but it really did improve the piece. They did keep my basic structure - which is unusual in a student note.
And with this, my last law school activity is done.
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Dagonee, you are really, really cool. The text is interesting, but reads as lawyer-jargon, which kinda makes sense, so I might get through it later ^.^
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I actually found that the text was remarkably clear. While some jargon was there, the paper was still written in a very accessible way. I enjoyed it. Congrats, Dag.
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Oh, for sure it was clear and understandable. I meant jargon as a sort of compliment. The paper feels like a profesional work, like something that a lawyer would write (which does make sense), and makes me wish I were writing such awesome stuff!
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