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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #25)
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Fragments and Feedback for Short Works
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #23)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #22)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #20)
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Of Life and Limb (post #8)
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Need a distraction...help with titles? (post #8)
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"Even Now", first 13 lines. (post #10)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #19)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #17)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #14)
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"Even Now", first 13 lines. (post #7)
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"Even Now", first 13 lines. (post #5)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #13)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #11)
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"Even Now", first 13 lines. (post #2)
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"Even Now", first 13 lines. (post #0)
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First 13.  Intriguing or insipid? (post #3)
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Shield Mage (post #3)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #9)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #7)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #5)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #2)
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Short story, needs readers (post #17)
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"The Puppet of Sorrow", a YA fantasy novel. First 13 lines. (post #0)
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Untitled Fantasy Novel (First 13 lines) (post #2)
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Desperately Seeking, well, a title (post #8)
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The Map (post #1)
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Denizens of the Night (post #3)
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Grammer question  (post #5)
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