I'm not sure if intestacy is the correct word, also I'm not sure if anyone really knows that word and if I should replace it with something like 'soul-estate'.

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My grandfather believes that murder is a purchase in the next world; your soul in payment for a death. In his mind the first stop for killers isn't hell, it is a board-room where the victims discuss how to legally divide up the assets. If it is a conference table with sixteen seats then people will be standing shoulder-to-shoulder arguing over my intestacy with Sarah acting as presiding judge

Sarah smiles at me.

Her teeth are white, professionally bleached and beautiful when you don't focus on the dark purple gums framing them. She notices me and sticks out her tongue; it is black and glossy like the body of a leech.

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Also, I'm not sure why you need the first paragraph. If the MC is dead and he's facing the tribunal, what grandpa thought is moot. Or tweak it a bit to say -"My grandfather was right. . . ."

If the MC's not dead, I'm lost.

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That word is probably going to be a big stumbling block for a lot of people.

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Yeah I agree, thanks. I'm going to have to replace intestacy with something... probably soul. I don't know though, soul seems to come with much more baggage, I wanted to use 'estate' but that doesn't make much sense either. All in all, it's just a word, yeah I'll use soul.

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Also, I'm not sure why you need the first paragraph.
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If the MC's not dead, I'm lost.

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Good point.

A few paragraphs later I say something to the point of "My grandfather never mentioned what happens if someone comes to collect early.". I could bump that up higher, to help the reader understand that he isn't dead yet. Maybe right after Sarah sticks her tongue out.