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tigerlilly
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Is anyone willing to critique my first ever attempt at flash fiction? It's only 133 words, so it seems kinda silly to post it here...it would only be missing a line or two. But I can email it.

I don't have a ton of time to critique long stories at the moment, but would be willing to trade if anyone wants comments on their first page.
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wetwilly
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I'll read. Send it on over. My current project is a longer story, so don't worry about reciprocating.
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tigerlilly
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Thanks! Just sent it to you.
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tigerlilly
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Any other takers?

Wetwilly gave me some really useful feedback (thanks!). Would love to get at least one more review before I rewrite.
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Consider a fragment fraction posted here, say one-tenth. I don't generally care to workshop privately. I might comment here on a fragment, say, thirteen words. Thirteen lines is a maximum. Perhaps a small posted fraction would entice others to comment on the whole.
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You can send it my way. Can't promise it'll be the best feedback you've ever received but at least it's a second opinion.

-A.L.
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tigerlilly
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Thanks, Lamberguesa. I don't see a way to contact you, since your email isn't listed in your profile, but mine's listed, so if you drop me a line I'll send the flash piece to you.
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TaleSpinner
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I'll take a look as well if you'd like. No need to reciprocate.

Pat
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tigerlilly
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Thanks, TaleSpinner, just sent it. [Smile]
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Apologies, my email should be visible now.
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tigerlilly
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No problem, just sent it. Thanks!
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