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debhoag
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I got a crit back recently, where the reader suggested that if I ran a spell check before sending it, I would get rid of the double spaces that were in the story.

I have an old laptop, with a really sticky thumb pad and clickers, and this is a regular problem. However, I do have spell check, and my spell check does not catch this kind of stuff. I am thinking what I need is grammar check, which I have had with other programs, but I am running Open Office now, and that didn't come with.

Does anyone know of an Open Office compatible grammar check I could download?

thanks. and yes, I know I spelled grammar wrong in the subject line, but can't get it back to fix. ARRGH!

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Rick Norwood
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Grammer/grammar is one of my bugbears. I know better, but...

Unless you are submitting a story to be published directly from a file, I don't think an extra space here and there will make that much difference. I don't like or trust grammar checkers -- they are wrong too often.

But the short answer to your question is, no, I don't know of such a program.


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debhoag
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Chuck's going to go awelding at a power palnt in New Mexico for a few weeks, and he is planning on taking the laptop with him so we can chat while he is gone. I'm hoping that when he actually has to deal with it, he figures out a way to fix it!

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JeanneT
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I used to use OpenOffice and ran into similar problems. I don't depend on grammar check much but without it there are some errors that don't get picked up. I am prone to getting the same word twice in a row if I pause while writing and the spellcheck didn't pick that up. It wasn't a serious problem but a bit annoying. Even more, I missed Word's Change Tracker which I use constantly and the ability to put in comments. I spent quite a bit of time looking for something to supplement OO's native abilities and never found anything that gave me what I wanted.
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annepin
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Do you have a find and replace function? If so you can use it replace all your double spaces with single spaces.
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debhoag
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Nice, Annepin! Thanks for the tip. And please, Kathleen, if you see this, could you fix the subject line? I cringe every time I see it.

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Done!

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lehollis
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I know how to do it in Microsoft Word but not in another program. I used to be high up in their technical support department, and I wrote a few of the billions of technical articles on it.

The grammar check feature in Word can be a bear, but you have to configure it before it helps at all. After leaving it on for years, I can usually put a story together without ever seeing squiggly green lines anywhere. The red lines are another matter.

If a sentence does get flagged, I may not agree with it but I generally find the sentence is stronger after I tinker with it a while. The original still might have been right, but it helps me see how things can be done differently.


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If I understand your problem correctly, a simple solution would be to run a "find and replace" and find " " (space space) and replace with " " (space)
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The MS Word grammar checker is a good tool. You just have to know what you want to do. I run it after everything I write, but more often than not, I ignore the results. Usually it catches things I do intentionall (fragments, for instance). Very occasionally it catches something I did wrong, and for that, it's worth running. Always save first, though.
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I played around with several grammar checks.
Each author is looking at a different problem they are trying to solve. They have rules they consider critcal to flag as reminders. They have a flag that simply says THERE IS A PROBLEM WITH THIS SENTANCE AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IT IS. Some grammar checks are more interested in style checking than others.
I had one where it would flag about sentances being too long, then at the end when it gave statitstics, it would suggest that sentance length needed to be varied.

The main rule for grammar checks is to figure out why they are flagging that rule, and then decide whether it is something that can be ignored for the type of writing you are doing.

What I figured out is that one should use several of these grammar checks if possible, bouncing the document off each other until there is a sort of agreement.
They will find your dummest mistakes quickly.
For me, my best final grammar check is to read the piece out loud to someone. If you trip over a sentance, even if you read it right the second time, flag it. It needs work because it says something in the wrong way. Your voice and the other person's ears will find the errors no grammar check will ever notice.


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KayTi
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Glad you got some good ideas, Deb. I use MS Word 2003 and can usually find double spaces by eyeballing my copy, but I've always been able to do that (used to be handy as a psuedo-parlor trick in my previous life as a consultant. I could identify which box on the Powerpoint slides was 2 pixels left shifted from page to page.) The thing I was going to suggest was switching to a different font that might make the spaces more obvious.

I strongly prefer Arial for my work and find that I don't have trouble noticing things like double spaces when in Arial. It's a proportional font, though, so the letter "l" takes up less space than the letter "p" and therefore it's not appropriate for story submissions. Sigh. Courier is such a messy looking font.

My only other contribution to this thread is that I use grammar check on Word as a general rule (it's turned on like spellcheck so that it runs automatically on my documents while I work) and find that it catches a few important things, but mostly I ignore it like Spaceman said.


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lehollis
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In MS Word, you can set it to notice double (or single) spaces in the Spelling and Grammar options.

Go to Tools, Options, Spelling and Grammar, and set Writing Style to be Grammar and Style. Then click on the Setting button below that, and select the options you want it to watch, including "Spaced Required Between Sentences."


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JeanneT
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I think there is a difference in "trusting" grammar check and using it for the few things that it will catch. I tend to write pretty fast and although I'm a fairly good typist, at times I don't type what I meant. Grammar check will catch the weird mistakes, usually, like typing its when I meant it's, and, of course, I know the difference, but we all make typos. We are also human at proofing and miss things. So one extra check is good, in my opinion. Of course, I only use it to bring up things to look at, not let it ever make corrections.
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Do you mean double spaces at the beginning of sentences and/or following a period? Is this not appropriate any longer? I thought you were supposed to leave two spaces after a period and before the first word of a new sentence.

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debhoag
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I haven't left two spaces following a period since I got out of typing class and started using computers. We're talking nearly thirty years, so I'm not sure exactly why that is, but I think it had something to do with line breaks. If you put more than one space after a period on a computer, the way teh line breaks go, you could end up with one space at the end of the line, then a line break, and the next space at the beginning of the following line.
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annepin
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Most computer word processors automatically proportion spaces between sentences, so you need only enter one between sentences, rather than the traditional two.
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JeanneT
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Yeah, it's been a very long time since that was standard. Everyone is right though that if you don't have a check that will pick it up just running search and replace will fix it.
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You guys are making me feel old... I had that drummed into me in high school and have always done it. Sigh another habit to break.

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WouldBe
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Don't feel bad, GodHunt. There is so much contradictory information on the Internet about this, it is maddening.

Here is an (otherwise?) good manuscript format article that contradicts this. In it, he gets right snippy about the two-space controversy:

"Always place two spaces after any sentence-ending punctuation. 'Always?' you ask. Always!"

He then goes on to say that you shouldn't listen to "these people," the single-space community--you know who you are. He even poo poos the direct manuscript disk to typsetter counter-example.


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lehollis
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In the old days, typewriters used the same space for every letter on a page. That means an i was as wide as a W. Computers used a process called kearning to squish them together, so an i used less space than a W, and a AW would overlap slightly because of the parallel angles of the nearest lines.

Thus, in the old days, two spaces broke sentences up a little nicer, making a manuscript easier to read, but it was no longer necessary once computers and more advanced typewriters arrived.

Sadly, the habit is still ingrained for many folks, and some people get rather feisty about it--as the above example indicates.

In any kind of electronic format, it's just useless and pointless.

However, monospaced fonts are ... monospaced. They don't kearn, in other words. Thus, the Courier 10 or 12 we use for manuscripts looks like the old style manuscripts.

So the important question is what do we use when we submit? If we're submitting in monospaced font, should we still double-space?

James D. Macdonald said either way, no one will care.

Anyone have any thoughts on whether Courier Font should be double-spaced or not? Or will editors even notice?


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JeanneT
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The prevailing opinion seems to be, not. But I find it hard to believe that any ms would be turned down over this point as opposed to failure to have 1 inch margins, etc.

Edit: I went to the SFWA website to check their comments on this and it wasn't even referred to that I could find although they give pretty complete ms formatting guidelines. One amusing point is that one of their articles on the subject says to make your title in all caps and the other says to never do that.

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Tricia V
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I double space. But I'm also not published yet.
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lehollis,

As I understand it, you are lumping pair kerning and proportional typefaces together, but they are different concepts.

An un-kerned proportional typeface will have narrower spaces allocated to narrower glyphs, but each glyph is treated as an immutable rectangle; an 'I' is exactly one width, an 'A' is another, and a 'W' is another. But every 'I' is given exactly the same width on the page. Likewise every 'A' or 'W'.

Kerning is something different. It takes into account that glyphs are not rectangular, and that spacing them as if they were looks awkward. So it squeezes characters together so that, depending upon their shapes, an aesthetically-pleasing notional distance exists between them. Thus the "AW" digraph will be squeezed, as you describe, but "IA" and "WI"cannot be, so "IAW" will be rendered in less space than "AIW".

Pair kerning could be done with a fixed-width typeface, although that would rather defeat the purpose of using such a face, so it is generally not done.

For the record, I'm unable to type an end-of-sentence period, or a colon, without reflexively pressing the space bar twice.

I see much fervency dedicated to deprecating this practice, pointing out that it's no longer necessary. But is there harm in it? Simply because something is not necessary is not de facto evidence that it is harmful and must be avoided.

-G


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lehollis
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quote:
As I understand it, you are lumping pair kerning and proportional typefaces together, but they are different concepts.

Yes, I did. I was going for the simplest explanation with an emphasis on explaining why it used to be required and was now optional.

While they are separate, most every explanation I've seen assumed proportional typeface. In fact, Wikipedia says: "In typography, kerning ... is the process of adjusting letter spacing in a proportional font."

Yes, Wikipedia is informal; so was my explanation.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kerning

Anyway, thanks for the clarification. It's good to be familiar with typesetting in this industry

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JeanneT
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It is hard to imagine that anyone would reject a ms because of this, but I think the original discussion was about doing it accidentally so it wouldn't be consistent. That would make it in effect typos and that CAN get a ms rejected.

There are a few publishers that still even ask for double spacing. I recall running into one recently although I can't recall off-hand which one it was.


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Cool. You guys are talking about kerning.

Isn't that like the forth circle of word geekdom? Hatrack is such a cool place.


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I just today was asking about how to see the non-print keys.
Here's the answer: Go to view and check 'nonprinting characters'.
Once you do that, there will be a dot for each time you hit the space key. After that, you can use the search and change function.
It is also a good way to check for the enter key. I often just automatically hit it at the end of a line and it messes the finished product up.

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debhoag
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Thanks, palmon! It's amazing how this thread has taken on a life of it's own. I was scrolling through earlier and laughing. I'm still looking for a program I can download and initiate through Open Office, but this will work for a while!
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Cool, kerning. Now can we talk about ligatures and the correct usage of small caps? I love this stuff... (Of course, you can't actually use good typography in submissions, more's the pity.)

Deb, I haven't tried this (I haven't installed OO on my wife's laptop yet), but you might be able to save to HTML, and then copy and paste the text from within the browser. (HTML automatically eliminates excess white space.) It might not work if OO inserts non-breaking spaces for some reason, but it would be worth the experiment if you know how to do it.


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I'll give it a try! Thanks, Oliverhouse
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