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You treat a paragraph with dialogue like any other paragraph. It would be indented if it's a new paragraph.
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Every time there's a new speaker, you start a new paragraph. And, as JeanneT said, every new paragraph needs to be indented.
In the examples you show above, wrenbird, you don't need to start a new paragraph unless someone other than Judy (the person referred to in the first two sentences) is the speaker. The dialogue should go with the person speaking it.
Any other indenting is not correct in standard prose.
---->On a sunny day in May, Judy was walking down the street. She saw Joey coming towards her. "Hi, Joey," she said. ---->"Hi, Judy," Joey said. ---->"What are you doing today?" Judy asked. ---->Joey shrugged. "Oh, nothing."
What about that last part, where I have words before the dialogue?
quote:¶On a sunny day in May, Judy was walking down the street. She saw Joey coming towards her. "Hi, Joey," she said. ¶"Hi, Judy," Joey said. ¶"What are you doing today?" Judy asked. ¶Joey shrugged. "Oh, nothing."
A paragraph break for the last line is correct because Joey is a different character from Judy, different actor, action, and speaker. I'm fond of the pilcrow symbol to denote paragraph breaks. "Joey shrugged" in the last line is a gestural dialogue tag, what some writers call a beat. I prefer to place those within the dialogue whenever possible rather than before. "Oh" is a discourse marker. Setting discourse markers off from the main sentence with gestural dialogue tags might strenghten the meaning of the emotion intended and more closely represent the sequence of actions. ["Oh." Joey shrugged. "Nothing."]
¶On a sunny day in May, Judy was walking down the street. She saw Joey coming towards her. ¶"Hi, Joey," she said.
I prefer that because there is a reference to Joey coming toward her in the narrative. I prefer not to see action by a second character in a paragraph with dialogue. If there is, it's better to use a new paragraph.
I don't agree on putting the Oh before the shrug, but that's a stylistic issue. I think it reads more smoothly with the shrug first. Either would be correct. It's just a matter of personal style.
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> I don't agree on putting the Oh before the shrug, but that's > a stylistic issue. I think it reads more smoothly with the > shrug first. Either would be correct. It's just a matter of > personal style.
It's only partly a stylistic issue. Putting "Oh" before the shrug implies he said "Oh" before shrugging.
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I've been told it's possible to put paragraph indentation into HTML, but I don't have a clue as to how it's done. (I wish I did know. I could use it.)
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You can indent a whole section with the <blockquote> </blockquote> tags, but I haven't seen how to indent for paragraphs, except with (which gives a blank space in html, so if you want more than one blank space, you have to use a series of them).
Edited to add that it gave a blank space here, too, so I'm going to post it with spaces in between the symbols. If you want it to insert a blank space, you have to move them all next to each other.
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I believe html is turned off in this forum. UBB codes are on though. The <p> tag in HTML doesn't appear to be supported in UBB, at least the version running on this forum. HTML character entities are allowed and supported though. w3schools has an extensive list of ISO 8859-1 symbol entities and character entities http://www.w3schools.com/html/html_entities.asp. Many are supported in most browsers. The character entity for the small e acute accent as in cliché is é. A wider indent or space character entity than the nonbreaking space one is the emspace  . One begins this paragraph.
I have a clip file of the character entities I use most often so I don't have to visit w3schools to look them up.
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