Just wanted to share here the short version of the critique guide I made for Inked Voices, a site for online critique groups. You can get it here -- no sign up or registration needed, just yours to have. You can use it with your group or for self-editing.
If you have feedback on it, or if you write in a particular genre that typically has additional things to look for, I'd love to hear from you. I'm considering whether to create genre-specific guides in the future.