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Just wanted to know if anyone would be willing to read the first two chapters of my (hopefully) epic fantasy novel? This is book one of a planned trilogy. I've already posted the first thirteen of an earlier version of this, but I've made some changes and wanted to get some feedback on style and plotting. Thanks!
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could you offer a synopsis? send it to my email as the chances of me remembering to come back and check the thread are slight at best.
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Finish the novel before taking ANY critiques too seriously. You my find you want to make your own changes later.
If there is no rush, you can send me 1 chapter. If I want the second, you know you've had some success. Also, if you only want certain aspects of a critique...not them.
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