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This is a speculative fiction/urban horror novel I'm currently writing. Comments on this 13 are welcomed, as well as a read of the first two chapters (approximately 6000 words), or just this chapter (approximately 3000 words).
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Hi, you'd better put your rewrite into your first post, or post it on another thread and delete this one. People aren't happy when they read the first one, crit it and then scroll and see the second.
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