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HRE
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I'm editing my essay for the National Merit Scholarship right now. Do you know if I would be made ineligible or if my essay would be scratched if I was to post portions of it online for review and critique?
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Farmgirl
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Just my gut feeling is that it would NOT be a good idea. Remember there are lots of other people out there right now working on THEIR National Merit Scholarship essay (including my daughter's best friend).

I don't know the rules, it just seems to me like you may regret doing so. I would hate for the judging board to decide to do random internet searches to check for plagarized stuff, and see any of your words pop up. (edit: not that it would be plagarized, it would be your own words -- but they don't know you from your screen name, etc.)

FG

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ketchupqueen
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Agreed. If you have specific critiquing needs, you might want to ask a few people to let you e-mail it to them and have them give their opinions. I think that's allowed (although I'm not sure.)
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James Tiberius Kirk
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<-- Concurs. Asked the same question once.

--j_k

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Ela
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My son's English teacher and my husband worked with my son on his National Merit essay.
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"...but they don't know you from your screen name..."

And if they think it's plagerized, they won't ask "Are you HRE?" before they toss your essay out.

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When did they start having an essay requirement? When I was in high school, you got semi-finalist based on your PSAT scores, and... honestly I don't remember what their basis was for finalist. We had 7 semi-finalists in our class (of 60 students), and six of us made it to finalist. The one who didn't... well, he had tried to test the system. They weren't amused.
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I think we had a very short essay for our National Merit applications...because I seem to remember that unlike every other application I was filling out at the time, everything had to fit solely on the page they gave you.

-pH

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HRE
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The semifinalists are selected by PSAT scores, and then there is a very short essay (~500 words) about what distinguishes you, what your goals are and so forth.

I wrote my essay about my goal and what I have done to reach it, as opposed to making what is basically a list in paragraph form of my accomplishments, activities, and so forth.

Because of the way I wrote it, though, there are many noteworthy things I've done that I didn't get to include. I'm starting to have second thoughts about what to do with it.

What do you think?

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James Tiberius Kirk
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The advice I got? Show, don't tell. Write about yourself, not necessarily about what you've done. And more importantly, sound like "you".

--j_k

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As far as I could tell from my experience and from just looking at the numbers the essays aren't really that important. My essay was pretty awful compared to the ones I wrote later on in the college application process and I did fine. Also, there are I believe 16000 semifinalists and 15000 finalists, so as far as I could tell the only people who didn't make it to finalist were the ones that didn't turn in the application.
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