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Topic: If Humans have ascribed to Robots their qualities, then is Man not the machine?
Reticulum
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posted November 08, 2013 09:32 PM
The Soft Machine Birthed from blackness, 9 months unseen, Enters the world, the soft machine It's circuits cast of blood and will, Each synapse bred to live and kill, The soft machine, it's programs strive, To keep the march of flesh alive Mechanical empires, constructed death, A border crossed, can mean no less The soft machine, it's hard empire, At odds against its own desire. When light of day cascades to night, The softest dreams paint lost delight. Yet paced decay and time infernal, The soft machine is not eternal .
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TomDavidson
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posted November 08, 2013 09:38 PM
When you put an apostrophe in "it's," you're indicating that it's a contraction (i.e. "it is.") If you're using the possessive pronoun "its," you don't need an apostrophe.
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Reticulum
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posted November 08, 2013 09:43 PM
Thank you for the correction.
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SteveRogers
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posted November 13, 2013 03:57 PM
Have you considered a career as a spoken word artist?
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