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Sunset's Dawn first 13 lines
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Lumeton Draft #... I lost count
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Graveyard - Dark Fantasy - asking for help with the first three to five chapters
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Skepsis Intro
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Synopsis for The Shaman's Curse
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Twilight of Tomorrow 110+ pages
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Remnants of the Rim - review prologue and first 13 lines.
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Demonmachy-Chapter Ten
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Please read the first 13 lines to my novel's prologue and comment. Thanks!
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The Eyes of a Child
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The beginning of my first work, "A King's Adiser, The Story Of Daniel".
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The Trigeminal Chronicles - first 13 lines of Prologue
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13 Lines (plus opening prophecy)
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My first novel's first 13.
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Atlantis Rising - Chap 1, first 13
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First lines of opening chapter--Dragon Kiln
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Dragon Fate Synopsis.
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YA Novel Synopsis HELP!
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