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And the FAE actually a straight science fiction
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SavantIdiot
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Shaman's Curse Synopsis--One More Time
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Meredith
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Fantasy Novel (WIP) 13, begging feedback
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nathanpence
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"The King's Advisors" first 13
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Collin
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The Rise of Men
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novotnyfam
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1st 13 lines of Isaac Juxtaposed, fantasy novel
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wad
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5
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Tangel, Webb and Weaver
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Andrew_McGown
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Blood Will Tell--Fantasy--Just started
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Meredith
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My 13 liner. Please critique. Please be harsh.
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electronicron
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possible first thirteen untitled fantasy
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andersonmcdonald
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2
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YA Novel... no sugar-coating, please.
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Andrew_McGown
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7
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The Protest
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Soulizum
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6
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Seeds appx 115,000 word fantasy novel
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Angfla
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4
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Dreamer's Rose
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Meredith
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3
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Counterevolution
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novotnyfam
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5
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The Reunion
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Icared
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4
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Sleeper
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skadder
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9
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Earth's Gate or The Azure Lake or....
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Unwritten
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3
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Eyes of a Child - 1st 13 rewrite
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ade
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8
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"Silverbrook" first 13
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Telik
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8
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Sara
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tj5to1
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4
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Saving Ava, first 13
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morgansmarcos
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6
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Another One Bites the Dust
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Rexwell
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5
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Thinking Amongst The Thoughtless
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imperialcancer
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2
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first attempt, no name atm
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JasonHall
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5
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Shaman's Curse Query Redux
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Meredith
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14
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Bitrazer 2.0
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JohnMac
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6
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Chimera World (Plz read 1st 13 lines) (Sci-Fi)
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imperialcancer
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5
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The WanderKing
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Gaudrhin
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4
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Battle of Kayen
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Snow Crash
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Godslayer
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Teraen
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4
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Aot4W - opening scene
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Crank
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teaser.
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drake the thall
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5
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The Sower, 1st bit
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cosette
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2
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Panix versus the Murgrontian Menace
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Owasm
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3
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Hornblade 1st 13 of chapter eight
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andersonmcdonald
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Ravenspur
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MarciusAlman
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The Stormborn (Fantasy)
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Kitti
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"Sent", Ch 1
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zerostone
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Mass, Chapter 1
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JeffBarton
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