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tamalynn
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Member # 1304

posted

I made my first attempt at writing a flash fiction piece, but ended up with 800+ words instead of the attempted 500.

It's light fantasy, mostly playing on a pun. I'm mainly looking for comments on how to shorten this thing (if possible), as well as general comments on how this piece holds up.

If anyone's up for it, I'd be most appreciative...

Posts: 35 | Registered: Dec 2001 |

Kolona
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Member # 1438

posted

I'll give it a go.

Posts: 1810 | Registered: Jun 2002 |

tamalynn
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Member # 1304

posted

Thanks Kolona. I've just sent it to you.

Posts: 35 | Registered: Dec 2001 |

srhowen
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Member # 462

posted

Please send. Had a computer crash of sorts yesterday--so I am behind on everything--but what the heck.

Shawn

Posts: 1019 | Registered: Apr 2000 |

Survivor
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Member # 213

posted

I'd be interested in reading it.

Posts: 8322 | Registered: Aug 1999 |

huntr
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Member # 1490

posted

I'd be interested in reading it. I really need to start small for my first critique. I would appreciate the opportunity.

Chuck

Posts: 20 | Registered: Aug 2002 |

tamalynn
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Member # 1304

posted

Thanks guys. I prefer crits via-email, because they're easier to keep.

Now just give me a few minutes to figure out who I've already sent this thing to... <dazed look>

Whoo, I think I'm kinda out of it today. Need some caffeine...

Posts: 35 | Registered: Dec 2001 |

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