Although the store was dark, he could see the bags of dried flowers, and dried bat guano, the jars of preserved frog brains, and pickled pigs livers on the shelves. Customers often asked what the pigs livers were for. The standing rule was that only D’Nera knew what potions they were for.

The truth was, she ate them.

As he approached the door at the back of the shop, he could smell Jasmine. He hated that flower. It had no alchemical properties so why did she insist on keeping them. The work it took just to keep them alive made them not worth it. If they had some alchemical value he could understand keeping them, but all she did was put them in vases and put the vases in her rooms. You can’t go into her rooms without smelling those stupid flowers.

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You haven't used the name of your POV character.

If this begins a chapter, it is a starting point of sorts. Therefore, you need to reaffirm our knowledge of characters, even if you introduced them in chapter 1. Use "his" name at least in the first sentence.

" It had no alchemical properties so why did she insist on keeping them. QUESTION MARK The work it took just to keep them alive made them not worth it. If they had some alchemical value he could understand keeping them, but all she did was put them in vases and put the vases in her rooms."

Aside from the missed question mark, the reason I quoted this section is because it's redundant. The last sentence can be cut entirely without losing any meaning...you mentioned it before and almost in so many words. You don't even really need the part about putting them in vases in the rooms, but if you wanted to retain that part of the seentence I wouldn't find fault with your logic.

"You can’t go into her rooms without smelling those stupid flowers. "

Once again, redundant.

No I haven't posted any of chapter one. Chapter one requires a complete redo. Or I have to make it the prologue.

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