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This is an experiment, is it worth pursuing? Susan
Grant stood beside his broken-down car and looked into the darkened sky. The country road was deserted.
Something was about to happen. Soon. He could feel it in the air. The night was dark… well, of course, nights are dark, but this was a different kind of dark. An expectant dark.
A light breeze ruffled the tops of the trees that were silhouetted against the night sky.
The only thing missing was a chilling fugue of psychotic music. But this was Real Life. In Real Life we get no such warnings
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I only have one chapter if anyone wants to read it. And yes, it's the voice that's a little different for me. I'm trying to set a tone. Thanks Susan
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It's a bit cutesy, but similar notions have sold in the past. Go ahead and try it, the most important thing is whether you can keep it up and maintain the narrative consistently.
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