Well, I wasn't being sarcastic and I wasn't upset. Your story is well done. As to being dark, well it is a dark world you made up there but that isn't bad.
I will describe the video later tonight. I'm not sure who the band is but video involves a guy digging a grave while someone else goes through an adventure.
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The publisher asked to see some more of my work, so I sent him a story titled 10:17. It has never appeared here on the hatrack forums, but it's up!
Take a read if you'd like to, it's a lot different than the other one, it's a romance/mild sci-fi.