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WatersOfMimir
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Anything that preaches the evil of love is intrinsically opposed to everything I believe and write about, and I not only would not help you to write it, but I would do everything I could to stop you from publishing it.

When you get up in the morning, look for something good in the world. You'll find it. Just like when you look for something bad in the world - which is obviously what you've been doing recently.


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Now I'm really intrigued as to what the message must have originally said...

I'm not sure what's so shocking about the notion of love being evil. There are tons of songs about how much love hurts, love breaks hearts, yadda yadda. The sloppiness of the language blurs painful things and evil things into the same broad category.

On the other hand, I can't help but think that most stories declaring that love is evil would probably come across as a bit whiney...

--James Maxey


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James Maxey
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Waters, I'm intrigued by your comments that you would do every thing you could to stop publication of a story equating love with evil. I'm very, very curious about this mindset. I'm not being critical here, nor am I trying to bait or lure you into an argument. I'm someone who has honestly never been offended by something I read to the point that I felt it should be surpressed. I'm not a Christian or a Muslim, but I would never even think about trying to block the publication of the Bible or the Koran. I'm an avid lover of democracy and capitalism, but I believe that any comprehensive library should carry the works of Marx and Mao. Even Mein Kamf deserves a place on the bookshelves in my world. The thoughts in many of these books flabberghast and frighten me, but so what? Ideas compete in a kind of Darwinian arena. Awful ideas like communism and fascism eventually get weeded out in competition with other ideas. And, the existence of these bad ideas makes the good ideas stronger. I think America is freer and stronger today after competing against these other ideologies. Much of the eventual successes of the civil rights movement can probably be traced to American's having learned from the Holocaust what happens when one race is treated as nothing more than animals.

That said, maybe I'm wrong. Suppose you were in an editor's office and you saw the "Love is Evil" story sitting on the slush pile, and read enough of the opening page to know it was the most vile thing you'd ever read in print. It contained words that could, if followed by even one person in a thousand, seriously damage society as you would like it to be. Would it be a moral act to take the manuscript and burn it? If the editor had already accepted it, would it be okay to wipe the file on his computer? If the presses were running, would it be fair to throw a wrench into the works then torch the building? (By the way, if you were the editor, of course you have every right to reject it. No one is obligated to publish something offensive to them.)

I guess I'm curious about this in light of the recent CBS canning of the Reagan movie. I read the script excerpts on Drudgereport and they were definitely slanted to make Reagan look bad. I mean, he declares, "I am the Antichrist!" Hard to put a good spin on that. On the other hand, all the people who rose up to boycott the show mystify me. So the show is going to be a left wing hatchett job--don't watch it if this sort of thing bothers you. But why not let the lefties who would get a gratuitous thrill at this sort of thing have their jollies? Where's the harm? If the right wants a movie that is full of praise for Reagan, then make one. Let the two movies compete.

I'm rambling aren't I?

I'll shut up now.

-James Maxey


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Well, the harm would be that a lot of those people would decide they don't want to watch shows put out by CBS...and that is a pretty significant harm for CBS.

I'm sure that if someone wanted you to put your name on a book that was essentially a glorification of the Third Reich and Hitler's great vision of exterminating all the Jews and other lesser races to make way for his master race, then you wouldn't do it just because you wouldn't want to do it. But you also might legitimately concern yourself about what lending your name to such a work would say about you as a person, and how you would then be regarded, "Oh, James Maxey, isn't he the one that wrote Adolf Hitler, champion of the SuperMan?"

WatersOfMimir couldn't really do very much to stop Damascus (take that syllable by syllable and see if it doesn't make you laugh) from publishing, but it is her legitimate right to do that everything (actually, because she can't really do much to stop him getting published, it is her legitimate right). I am of course excluding the idea that she meant anything downright criminal like pre-emptively killing the child (but wouldn't that fit in wonderfully with the theme of his book--ooh, more on this later, or in the other thread). If she wants to start a letter writing campaign to each publisher to whom Damascus (okay, enough of that) submits his book, saying that she is appalled by their publishing of anti-love fiction, then that's just as much her right as it is his to submit such a work.

After all, free speech doesn't need a license or anything. She's free to speak her piece, as he's free to speak his (forgive me if I'm confusing the genders here, both of these members are new and I haven't asked them which gender pronouns they prefer--actually, now that I think about it, I should just call them WOM and DAC...no, that doesn't work so well).

I have to agree that most literature should be completely free. After all, as we have discussed elsewhere, words on a page are pretty much voluntary, so they usually cannot of themselves impair freedom (the only proper consideration of whether something should be outlawed in a free society is whether it materially impairs another person's freedom).

Of course some things are different. I think that medical researchers have proved that pornographic images are actually addictive, in that they cause a stereotyped self-reinforcing behavoir characterized by a change in brain function. I think that it is possible that some people might have a similar reaction to certain words in print (fighting words as well as f---ing words). But as for a story in the abstract, no...I don't think it should be illegal.

But neither should there be any bar to Waters letting publishers know that taking an anti-love stance is going to cost them financially.

P.S. Ditto for the Reagan thing, if a studio is considering publicly airing a show that is based on patent untruths about a known and well liked (in some quarters, at least) public figure, then the people running things deserve to know that some viewers will decide they don't particularly like or trust that studio anymore.

At least Damascus isn't planning to pretend to be writing this story about actual people (as far as I know--which I don't).


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well, maybe these posts should be called--I need attention.

3 with the same theme by the same person.

Shawn


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I have enjoyed your extremly negative feedback! Especially Shawn, who hit me right on the nail. I do need attention. Also whoever guessed that i had recently broke up with my girlfriend, Way to go Idaho!, you guessed right! whoever wrote about 10,000 pages of bull crap before you get good well looks like i got a long way to go =) !

Hey guys thanks for responding even if it was merely to poke fun or ridicule me. But I like your style! Now take your thoughts of my sunday made for tv movie and go to the feedback section.

I have tried to explain my story idea in the upmost detail.

PLEASE READ THAT AND TELL ME WHAT GARBAGE YOU THINK MY STORY IS!

Thank you Esteemed collegues<>

Ps I am a male human bieng.


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<<WatersOfMimir couldn't really do very much to stop Damascus (take that syllable by syllable and see if it doesn't make you laugh) from publishing, but it is her legitimate right to do that everything (actually, because she can't really do much to stop him getting published, it is her legitimate right).>>

First off, I am a HE.
Second off, yes, I realize I have little or no ability of keeping such a thing from being published. Which is why I am not afraid that I will do all in my power to stop it: because there is very little I can do. Words are cheap. )


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I knew I should have just used initials!

Aw, well, consider that I was using the (in my culture) gender neutral term 'Dude' for one of our members (I don't really remember who...could have been SR, now that I think of it) and she got really upset.


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Ah, not me Dude. Though I have said on occasion--umm I'm female--but not upset I'm used to it by now.

Teacher on first day of school--"Shawn, is Shawn here?"

Me--raising hand and waving, we had to say we were "here" by raising hand and waving.

Teacher--"OK, Shawn's not here." On to next name--"Julie, is Julie here--"

Me--still waving hand etc.

Teacher--"Ahh, OK. You can put you hand down now, Julie."

Me--"I'm not Julie I'm Shawn."

Teacher--"You interrupted me Julie."

Me--"No, I'm Shawn/"

Teacher--"You can't be Shawn. Shawn is a boy's name---

Well, then I ended up in the corner for arguing with the teacher and I suppose for having a boy's name. LOL

Shawn


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Phph! Everyone knows that Shawn is the feminine version of Sean...well, not everyone. I guess that there are men named Shawn as well.
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I keep trying to get my wife to let me name our next kid "pshawn."
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