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AaronAndy
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We've done short stories, even really short stories, but this takes it to the extreme: wired magazine asked 33 writers of science fiction, fantasy, and horror to compose a story in six words or less. Some of the results are pretty good, including one by our own OSC.

http://wired.com/wired/archive/14.11/sixwords.html

My personal favorite is still the Hemingway story that inspired the them all, but there's quite a bit of talent demonstrated in the rest.

Comments? Anybody want to try writing one?


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tnwilz
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Argot awoke suddenly. Proximity alarm screamed.

Ahh, thats more of a start, huh?

[This message has been edited by tnwilz (edited October 26, 2006).]


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Humanity is God's joke. Get it?
-Dave Williams-

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oliverhouse
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Many of these weren't what I would call "stories" -- streams of words having a semblance of a beginning, middle, and end in time, with hints of a conflict- character growth-based "plot" -- but a surprising number of them were. Margaret Atwood's is my favorite of those listed.

Here's the world's shortest fanfic:
Hobbits destroy ring, new age begins.

Historical fiction:
Vortigern invites Saxons, Britannia becomes England.


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Jammrock
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Newborn screaming, no sleep for me.

From the list, these are my favorites (and I'm not being biased):

The baby’s blood type? Human, mostly.
- Orson Scott Card

Kirby had never eaten toes before.
- Kevin Smith

Failed SAT. Lost scholarship. Invented rocket.
- William Shatner

Automobile warranty expires. So does engine.
- Stan Lee

Batman Sues Batsignal: Demands Trademark Royalties.
- Cory Doctorow

[This message has been edited by Jammrock (edited October 26, 2006).]


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wbriggs
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I can't remember who did this, but it may have been the source (unless Hemingway was):

Science Fiction Story for Telepaths

Aw, you know what I mean.


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wbriggs
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The rest of this story is

--

Cute AI, till it gets angry.

--

*I* found the body...too talkative.

--

I caught a leviathan. More bait?


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Lost my limbs. Call me "Matt." (I had to. Don't hit me.)

Magic lost, magic regained, enemies toast.

Local kid gets rich, devours souls.

Shape-shifter, will doppelgang for food.


We could also play "guess the story" with these:

Big fish. Lunatic captain. Dead people.

Evil space virus... now inexplicably inert.

Futuristic war, long-winded political diatribes.

Can't we all just grok along?

Big tornado, psychedelic dreams... weren't they?

Hardy adventurers go questing and win. (This is a one-to-many relationship.)


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rstegman
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Elbow Bumped Button, Universe Ended
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The basic plot for most of the Star Trek TNG episodes: Problems. Reverse Tachyon Pulse. Problems Solved.
Not to leave TOS out: Unknown Planet. Green women. Kiss, leave.
DS9: Space Station. Wormhole. Dominion. So what?
Voyager: Lost in Gamma Quadrant. Story wanted.
Enterprise: That's the guy from Quantum Leap!

The Wheel Of Time: Middle Earth meets Dune. Nothing happens.
Alvin The Maker: Alvin goes to court. Yet again.

[This message has been edited by ChrisOwens (edited October 27, 2006).]


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Robert Nowall
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Time flies. Girl cries. Universe dies.
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franc li
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What was that poem in Joe vs. the Volcano? I think it had more than 6 words.

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Survivor
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I admire Clarks integrity for not cutting, but I've admired him more if he'd realized that his story only needed five words. Indeed, quite a few of those "stories" are longer than they need to be.
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The Colonel
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My hair burned, and nothing else.
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Yeah, Survivor, but they had to fill their quota, didn't they? (Publisher: We want a 120,000-word novel...) So I suppose this is Clarke's five:

God: 'Cancel GENESIS.' Universe gone.

Hmm. Clarke seems to have a problem with this in general.


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Inkwell
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"I came, I saw, I conquered."

'Nuff said.

In Latin, that's only three words.

(Oh, and just so Kathleen won't have to waste precious energy getting after me about not referencing my quote, that gem is courtesy of Julius Ceasar.)


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Robert Nowall
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Nightfall. Suns set. Everybody goes mad.
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trousercuit
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Of course they do. Utterly believable.
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franc li
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"In Latin, that's only three words" sounds like a story to me. But then I am a linguist. :smiles smugly:
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We should have six-word discussions.
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oliverhouse
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It would certainly decrease absurd pontifications.
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trousercuit
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One question: could Survivor handle it?
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Robert Nowall
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Could he? I can, just barely...
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oliverhouse
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Do contractions count as one word?
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Robert Nowall
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How far apart are they now?
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oliverhouse
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Clarify, or someone'll try something weird.

[This message has been edited by oliverhouse (edited October 29, 2006).]


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A contraction is a single word.
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An'th's's'a'n'w'rd's'ntence.
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The whole conversation, or just me?
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I just accidentally deleted my addendum
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Survivor
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Want a post with four letters?
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Princess Kidnapped. Villain Killed. Princess Rescued.
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Robert Nowall
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Everybody here already knows those words.
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Survivor
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How about six in original order?

Okay, I'm just kidding. I was a little mad at the time, but now I think it was merely funny. As my above posts indicate, I started writing a lengthy reply right after my six word post and somehow managed to alt-z or whatever it out of existance. So I noted that in six words, then spent a minute thinking bad things, then wrote another post to commemorate that. My original plan was for a half page explication of the previous post, but I'm going to settle for this paragraph instead because I don't want a repeat of yesterday. Even if that's now funny, the second time would take another day or so to fade into proper perspective.


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Thanks, this thread is very entertaining.
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Just six {story goes here} words.
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This song is just six words long...

Zounds and dragon dung. It's seven.


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oliverhouse
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Survivor: Three times six equals eighteen.
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trousercuit
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Here's an interesting idea. How about only six-word sentences? For an entire paragraph? Without producing nothing but fragments? Like I just did?

I'd be mightily impressed by that.


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Robert Nowall
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Would you add syllables to haiku?
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Survivor
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Haiku...ry...er, no.
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oliverhouse
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Trousercuit, we can compose those paragraphs. We may get monotonous results, though.

Also, sentence structure can alter meanings. Homogenous sentences reduce continuity of thought. Longer sentences show cause and effect. Artificial limitations thus reduce overall clarity.

Some constructs are hard to avoid. Conjunctions may start sentences, for instance. That violates the exercise's spirit, though. Grammatical sentences are harder, but better. At least, that's what I think.

It's an interesting exercise to try. I wouldn't go for very long.


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I know I'm late, but my favorites were:

Wasted day. Wasted life. Dessert, please.
- Steven Meretzky

Epitaph: Foolish humans, never escaped Earth.
- Vernor Vinge

TIME MACHINE REACHES FUTURE!!! … nobody there …
- Harry Harrison

Tick tock tick tock tick tick.
- Neal Stephenson

Failed SAT. Lost scholarship. Invented rocket.
- William Shatner

Elbow Bumped Button, Universe Ended
- rstegman

Epitaph: He shouldn't have fed it.
- Brian Herbert

God to Earth: “Cry more, noobs!”
- Marc Laidlaw

Dinosaurs return. Want their oil back.
- David Brin

Bang postponed. Not Big enough. Reboot.
- David Brin

Mind of its own. Damn lawnmower.
- David Brin

Please, this is everything, I swear.
- Orson Scott Card

The Axis in WWII: haiku! Gesundheit.
- Howard Waldrop

Leia: "Baby's yours." Luke: "Bad news…"
- Steven Meretzky

Dorothy: "**** it, I'll stay here."
- Steven Meretzky

Sorr if this is long... but i liked 'em all !


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oliverhouse:

quote:
Trousercuit, we can compose those paragraphs. We may get monotonous results, though...

*clap* *clap* *clap*


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Nobody seems to have noticed my little word play on "no" as a syllable you could reasonably add to "haiku".
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This thread reads like question tennis.
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oliverhouse
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[bows]

Six words is so short that it's probably too limiting to be very helpul. What might be more interesting is a requirement for a very long word count -- say, 30 or 40 words -- and insist that there be no run-ons, no excess words, no rambling thought processes. Complete clarity with 40-word sentences would be interesting, and would provide enough flexibility to avoid the monotony.

I'm sooo not doing that today.


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