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JeanneT
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What grammar question? Whether or not to use "that."

*bonks head repeatedly on keyboard*

I find it so difficult to tell whether it's needed or not.


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I would say nine times out of ten, it isn't needed. Try the sentence with and without it and see which sounds best in you mind. Personally, I try to avoiding using that.
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It depends... (hence the need to bonk one's head, I suppose!).

Are you talking about "that" as in "That book", or the "The book that...", as in that vs. which, or as in, "He thought that the book was..."

In the last case, you can usually get away without "that". And if you can get away with out it, the general convention (at least as I was taught in journalism) was to get rid of it. Sometimes, though, people want it, and it seems particularly to confuse fiction writers when you don't put it in (my observation only).

I usually read it both ways, and see which one works better. Sometimes for the flow of the sentence, it's nice to have it in there. Other times, it's better without. If it could go either way, I take it out.

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JeanneT
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I'm talking about "He thought that the book was..."

The thing is that sometimes it's needed for clarity and more often it's not. I feel that I overuse it because I hate having sentences that aren't clear.

An example of when I know that it is needed is a sentence like this:

The governor announced his new tax plan would be introduced soon.

Here “that” is needed after "announced. Without it, it sounds at first like you are saying the plan itself has been introduced.

However, more often than not the word really isn't needed. My problem is that using “that” is rarely really wrong, though it may be unnecessary. Omitting “that” in some cases can be wrong.

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Christine
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You can definitely cut the that in "He thought that the book was..."

I had an English prof in college whose pet peeve was "that." He pretty much graded entirely based on the number of times the words "That" and "It" came up in a paper. I don't think he looked at anything else. No that or it = 100%! (Once he docked me for an "it" in a quoted passage!)

He drove me nuts. Extremism of that kind is never useful. That is a word that has a place in the English language.

"Where is that darn cat?"

"Once you've done that..."

One time I do not like to see the word that is in situations like in your last post -- you don't need the that when you immediately tell us what "that" is.

I think that you don't need a that in this sentence.
I think (what do you think?) you don't need a that in this sentence.

On the other hand....

Yeah, I think that's right. (What's right...that's right!)


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If you feel that you need that conjunction, I think that you are probably right.

If you feel you don't need that conjunction, I think you're also probably right.

Here's a nice little page on conjunctions. "That" is near the end of the page.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/conjunctions.htm

Hope that helps, and remembering my medications,
Pat

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JeanneT
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I disagree about the sentence, Christine. I find the sentence quite ambiguous without the "that", which is why I contend it is needed there. Whether the sentence is ambiguous (or even sounds right) without "that" is what I use and is in fact the rule you are supposed to use.

You should always tell what "that" is next. After all it is a conjunction so what it is conjoining has to be next.

However, whether something is ambiguous or not is a judgement call. You don't find it ambiguous. I do. And THAT (grins) shows how difficult the word is.

I'd rather have an extra word than an ambiguous sentence. I just wish there were some blasted rule about it. There isn't. It's totally a matter of judgement.


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rickfisher
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I'd go with Christine on this particular example (unless I've gotten confused: We're talking about "He thought [that] the book was, . . ." right?)

Since it's impossible to think a book (unless you're one of those who can conjure up a physical object by thinking about it), I don't see how leaving out the "that" can cause confusion.

On the other hand, look at Strunk and White's example, "He felt [that] his big nose. . . ." The ambiguity is clear, and amusing.

But I also agree that sometimes the word has to be used even when the possibility of ambiguity is trivial, as in this sentence.


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JeanneT
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quote:
I'd go with Christine on this particular example (unless I've gotten confused: We're talking about "He thought [that] the book was, . . ." right?)

I thought we were talking about "The governor announced his new tax plan" example. If we're talking about the book one, then Christine is right.

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Oh, yeah. That one needs it.
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Yeah, I have to agree. I think that that 'that' was used correctly in that particular instance. Or maybe not...
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Christine
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I left town for a few days...I'll be honest...I didn't read past your first ex. about the book. I totally missed the one about the governor.

Honestly, I would be fine with and without the "that" in :
The governor announced [that] his new tax plan would be introduced soon.

Obviously, without the that, you can briefly read this as "The governor announced his new tax plan." The thing is, by the time the sentence is over, I'm not at all unclear about what the governor is announcing. It just doesn't make sense any other way.

The thing the "that" really does here is to keep things straight in our head mid-sentence, which can be useful. It's usually best to understand a sentence as you read, rather than after the fact.


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