This chapter doesn't have a title because I'm in the process of revising the whole chapter. And I'm also messing with the book title, so that's not available either.

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The girl arched her head to get a better view of what was happening on the other side of the wall. She could just barely see through the peephole what appeared to be a small gathering of well-dressed people. Their attentions were loosely focused on two men standing before the group, and even then it was only a scant type of attention, there one moment and gone the next. Faye sniffed disdainfully at them. She knew that they were all nobles from powerful families and those types altogether thought themselves too important to have to act courteous, even before the king himself and his chief hostler.
Faye stifled a small yawn. She had been hiding silently since dawn, and it was already well into noontime. If there was one thing Faye could not stand, it was waiting...

two men standing Why not identify these fellows as well, they are the King and Hostler, right?

She knew that they were all nobles from powerful families We still don't know who she is, and now we have a group of generic nobles.

I am supposing that she knows who each and every one of these individuals are as well as their direct interest in the king and chief hostler. So why not hook us with this information right now, in your first paragraph?

As it reads now, it seems to vaguer than it really needs to be...Looking forward to your update though.

The structure of the 2nd sentence seems off. How about: “She could barely see a small gathering of well-dressed people through the peephole.”

“and even then it was only a scant type of attention, there one moment and gone the next” is already covered by “their attention was loosely focused”. Don’t need to say it twice.

Don’t need: “just”, “what appeared to be”, “She knew that”, “have to”, “himself”, “small”, “silently”, “already” – my personal preference is leaner prose.

Suggest replacing “and those types altogether” with “who”.