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Collin
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The ground was above him, the sky below him, as he tumbled face-forward across the hard-packed dirt. He came to an abrupt halt, hitting someone's legs. Sitting up with an extreme amount of effort, Daniel looked up. The face of one of the many Jewish boys gathered around to watch this stared down at him. The boy smiled devilishly down at him and kicked him hard in the ribs, causing even more pain to Daniel's already sore body. Where were Hananiah, Mishael, and Azariah?
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