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I've gone through the synopsis again. It's just under 900 words, this time. If anyone is willing to take a look--or another look--at it, please let me know.
I tried to:
Link it up to the query pitch, so it sounds like they're both about the same story.
Link the events together, so you can tell how one grows out of the other.
Give more of the character development.
Hopefully, I succeeded at at least some of that.
[This message has been edited by Meredith (edited July 18, 2009).]
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Sure. I'm game. I'm still interested in your story from your first pitch. Send it to the email address I sent you...
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Thanks. I've just gone through my e-mail. I remember you sending me your e-mail, but I can't find it right now. Could you send it again?
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